Unsaid

Unsaid

A Poem by SlightlyOdd

Not because you don't know what it is
But because it hurts to much to say it
So I'll act like i don't know it
But we both know i do
But it's harder to be alone so
I'll stay with you
I wonder if you ever knew
I really did love you
I still do
But I just can't trust you
So what will happen next
Is like everything else
Better left unsaid

© 2012 SlightlyOdd


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trust is a strange animal, sometimes it feels like strangulation

Posted 8 Years Ago


SlightlyOdd

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing
Wow. This is really touching. I feel this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
pretty close to the knuckle.....I admire the way you got so much into such a small space...Better the devil you know, eh?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing. Better then the devil, well I'm glad I've finally surpassed him.
Dr. Wood ?

8 Years Ago

Me too..And I never even MET him
Poignant write true too sometimes the unsaid is the breaker.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

thanks for reading
Better left unsaid
I love this line... there are things that SHOULD REALLY BE LEFT UNSAID...
because it might hurt the person you love...
Good poem... and interesting

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, I really like your profile picture, is it from anything?
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

photobucket...
oh no..say it..nothing should be left unsaid lol..xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing

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