Hey Y'all, That Girl Looks Good

Hey Y'all, That Girl Looks Good

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

Hey there, girl.

Is it ok if I follow?

Just wanna talk a little

Not a hard pill to swallow.

How can such a cold aura

Give this man a fever?

You from ‘round here?

Huh? No? Me either.

Let us go quest a bit

While the sky is still blue.

We’ll find something wild,

Something strange to get into.

And when the night falls

I got good hands so I’ll catch it.

I’ll present to you the stars

They’ll let you shine above the reckless.

Now I see you got it all

You even cook a little too.

Go on and do your worst

Because I have a sweet tooth.

Whip it up, girl

That delectable chocolate cake.

If it’s half as sweet as you

Then a piece I’ll have to take.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson

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it sounds like a rap ...cool

Posted 8 Years Ago

haha, this poem just makes me smile reading it! :) it's such a great and relevant topic to everyone, yet with a comical twist to the serious air surrounding it! Just reading this poem makes me want to meet this girl!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Funny part is she got flaky about two months after I wrote this hahaha

8 Years Ago

hahaha niceee
nice. it was very good. i like the part when you said you'd catch the night sky and present her the stars. it was sweet. keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Posted 8 Years Ago

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Shallow piece, but not bad. the random rhymes annoy me, but maybe they weren't intentional.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I know I like it. Haha! This is Awesome dude. Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hopefully that means you like it? lol

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Added on June 29, 2012
Last Updated on June 29, 2012
Tags: truth, lighthearted, fun, feelings, serious


Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY

I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..


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