Welcome Death

Welcome Death

A Poem by Surya pradha
"

the fear of death is greater than death itself...

"
withered leaves, t'was so plush,
stripped canopies, once merry mush,
the light of life, very faint,
everything gone, only darkness remains.

the tilted hourglass, empty now,
time to take your final vow,
a last, shaky, wheezy breath,
extinguished by the hands of death.

the ever victorious conqueror awaits,
none have bettered, none can evade
but, my dear, never fight,
just surrender, it'll be all right.

flood yourself with memories,
the beauty of life, you will see
close your eyes and you'll believe
death is the start of another eve.

burnt to ashes, your body may rot,
but the thought of you will definitely not
your spirit, your soul will always remain
never forgotten nor in vain


welcome death, tis not the end
only the beginning, my merry friend,
let it come when it must
go and get back your life's lost lust!
































 

© 2014 Surya pradha


Author's Note

Surya pradha
a different poem of mine. please review, your opinion matters a lot!

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It is indeed a nice poem and i liked the way you portrayed death in yet another way..I really like the use of words and the flow of language in this beautiful poem...and all the more you tried to rhyme each and every line which made the poem all the more interesting and because of that not for a single moment while reading your poem , it sounded monotonous...and actually this is the first poem i have ever read of yours and not for a single moment or any word , line or para on this poem , i felt that this was a different style of writing for you...i thought it is what you always write and felt like it was your comfort zone but after only did i read author's note that this was different style of writing for you...one from which you have written before..i indeed liked and i enjoyed reading it...
Never do leave writing...Keep on writing and thanks for sharing....
Take care
Riddhi

Posted 5 Years Ago


Surya pradha

5 Years Ago

well thnx a lot for ur kind words. glad u enjoyed it. its people like this who keep me motivated. gr.. read more
Riddhi

5 Years Ago

Welcome..
Brilliant attempt away from the usual one. God bless. Keep writing :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Surya pradha

5 Years Ago

thanks for your praise!
Mitali Shah

5 Years Ago

your welcome
The story of the mighty conqueror's gait in our lives.
What a subject to dwell in.
Great write!


Posted 5 Years Ago


Surya pradha

5 Years Ago

thanks for reading!
hmm, intriguing subject you've approached. Death give price to the beauty and life....why should we fear it....a nice write :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Surya pradha

5 Years Ago

thanks a bunch!
Fear of death? no my friend, its fear of "what happens after death", cuz its unknown. nice poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Surya pradha

5 Years Ago

yeah, true. thanks for reading!
Dani The Unreviewed

5 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
It is always interesting to see how other people perceive death, this was a very interesting poem I really enjoyed it these lines " flood yourself with memories,
the beauty of life, you will see
close your eyes and you'll believe
death is the start of another eve." Were just so excellently written.

Warren


Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks a bunch!
Its amazing and nicely done work..............

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

glad you enjoyed it!
Straight away going to my favourites! Wow...it was just awesome! Very very well penned!
One of the best poems I've read so far! Keep up the great work! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot. you really made my day!
Anahat

6 Years Ago

pleasure :)
A great poem on the fear of death. You speak with such wisdom. I am impressed. This would be my favorite poem on death.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks, glad you liked it!
I. Love. This. Poem. A. Lot.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks. a. lot.!

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Surya pradha

Chennai, India



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I'm 16 years old and proud to be an Indian. I really like writing and it has kind of become my hobby. I've written tons of poems and short stories and i would like to share them with everyone. more..

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