Heaven Drenched

Heaven Drenched

A Poem by Susan 🦋


Heaven Drenched

How time begets such sweet romance

as tender notions dare impart.

Eyes bathed in moonlight, now entrance

quick steady beating of my heart.


Strong wanting arms draw ever close,

your body easing every ache.

Restraint now falls like dominoes,

this lover's dance of give 'n take.


Beneath our love and all around

bright starlit Heaven's blush and stare.

Breath quivers as soft lips surround ... 

let warm winds eavesdrop, I don't care.


Oh, wrap me in unbound desire,

till moments pause midst passing time.

Thus, rendering twin souls afire

and fantasies begin to chime.


Come lay me down beneath thy brawn

to share in wondrous ecstasy.

Shall wish away the breaking dawn,

when blissful waves peak endlessly.


’Tween rest subdues our appetites

'pon fallen embers, duly quenched...

What lingers, once again, ignites

two worlds, forever Heaven drenched.


A lover's story laced in gold,

sustaining breath therein remains.

Alone, You perfectly uphold

the beating life ~ within my veins

© 2022 Susan 🦋


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ooooh be still my heart! This one brought tears. Really, wow. I don't come across a gem like this too often.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I think my pulse quickened as I read your poem. My eyes may have blushed. I would describe this poem as insatiable, as it satisfies the desire ... for rhyme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Hey Bill, thanks for reading. Yeah, lol this one’s a bit heated for sure🔥
This is terrific. I am honored to have read such sweetly chosen descriptive words. This was an exciting read too since it made me think some delicious thoughts. 😀

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Thank you Frankie! yes, this one is a bit packed with delicious thoughts :-)
Franky

1 Year Ago

True. Well done though. Your writing is very good too.
Honestly, I came here to return the read. I'm glad I did. It was a treat: beautiful poem and great use of words. I feel like I have just eavesdropped, but I'm sure you do not care.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Well thank you for stopping by! Yes, this one's a little heated for sure! ;)
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Gee
Classy, classic with perfect meter and rhyme. When read aloud it is faultless :))
Well done you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and the kind words!!
Beautiful and sensual poetry. 👏💛

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing 😊 I appreciate the comments.
I loved the poetry dear Susan. To be swimming in the heat of love. Make us know. We are alive. I liked the way you used the description. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for romance.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Aww Thank you for this great review! I'm smiling :-))))
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Susan.
This was mesmerizing. I especially enjoyed the 2nd stanza. Everything flowed so smoothly, and the rhymes were song like. The love and the passion were easily felt. Wonderfully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Thank you willweb! I appreciated you taking the time to read and review! :-)
Gorgeously written and romantically admired in, around any time of the day. You do love justice with mesmerizing appreciation and projection.
Heavenly write indeed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and for the lovely review Sammi!
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowz! You are welcome 😊.

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Added on June 11, 2022
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