A Poem/Diary/Thing

Welp... Eh.. This is stupid as s**t. By the way, this is character nonsense. Not my personal stuff

It's all flooding back

Whilst my sanity slips through the cracks

I've been having so many panic attacks

Oh the sorrows you bring

But our similar issues makes me do stupid things

I understand the pain 

I know you're in need

But you keep it bottled away

And you let the problems breed

I want to be happy

I would write poems that were sappy

But you make me dark

Let me have my f*****g heart

I love someone grand

But I will still offer to hold your bloody hand

You make it hard to tell him how I feel

You make me what to seal away all my emotions

And kneel to the end

I don't know what to do

I want to see it through

You are a version of me

And I must see to your joy

Even if that makes me a toy

You remind me of the pain

And how I want to cut out my veins

But I will help you

Because deep down

You and me

Are the same thing

And I need to love me

Like how he does

Forgive me...

Reviews

[Brittany Bostic]

Great poem! I really enjoyed how beautiful it was and how the words seemed to sing in notes across the page. The last line really brings it together, making the reader as a different question than I would have in the beginning of the poem or if that line were not there at all. Great!

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Aw thank you very much for your saccharine words!

[EileenMarie]

Some time another's actions brings us to look in the mirror and see ourselves. Great write!

[Philip Muls]

Destructive interdependency between two versions of you. Dark and raw.

[boblakin]

Didn't expect 'f*****g' to appear in this, caught me by surprise. Didn't hurt the poem though, which reads ok.

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Thanks and stuff

[Insight "MH"]

It's like a taste of your own medicine, wonderful poem.

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Thank you!

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[Richard]

very deep and intense .... as a character

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Heh... Yeah.. Thanks

[Inject Positivity]

Superbly written....Feelings and emotions of a broken heart....Very thought provoking and makes the reader feel your heart....Well done dear frnd....Full ratings.....

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Ah yeah.. That's how my lady Abelind's character feels. Things based on her are very emotional

[Inject Positivity]

Loved the profile pic....

[Inject Positivity]

Loved the profile pic....

[iamshadowine]

it was an amazing poem! i liked the last stanza way too much "
Because deep down
You and me
Are the same thing
And I need to love me
Like how he does

Forgive me..."
keep writing :)

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Ahh thank you. The last stanza is the only part of it I'm proud of (lack of self love much) but yeah thanks

[iamshadowine]

your most welcome :)