Alone and faith

Remember our company
But,
Ignore to be alone,
Yet people organized,
To dessert the left behind.
A partnership, and firm
To keep those out,
Unaccompanied
Doom would be solidarity,
When all they wanted
Was be part of a team,
Not abandoned,
But in friendship.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Brother it's what you have inside, thank you for reading

[Brad Dehler]

Alone and with faith. INteresting. The organized i dont believe dessert the "left behinds" rather we are all scrapping and scraping to make it and unify in that effort while others fall out of view? Nice concept piece

[Betty Hermelee]

Certain organizations are too exclusive and block people who want to join, same with clubs... Frankly nothing should be that snotty to shut people out and then they feel left out and alone; people want to be part of a team to have solidarity with something; left out is abandonment in some form.This is an important part of life and glad you commented on it.
Best, B

[DIVYA]

I have been left out by many in solidarity. It wouldn't be inaccurate to say that I'm almost always the one left out, because mostly, I refuse to confirm. In fact now, I've begun enjoying being left out! I sense the dissappointment and dejection felt when one is dropped out of a team. Being human means wanting to confirm and belong. This is such a thought provoking poem!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow I guess being alone can be a blessing.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts

[Crowley]

Putting stock and trust in a partnership of any kind can definitely lead to loneliness and desolation. The desire for togetherness gets ugly when you feel you have been put out to graze for no reason other than you were the easiest on to cull from the heard, regardless if you were also the most valuable in your loyalty. Not sure if I got this right, I am rather obtuse at times. Its desperate and honest though, and a great piece of writing!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow your thoughts and reply hit home,obtuse cutting the heart a one without it we can't survive in the end we need love.
Thank you for sharing this

[Richard🖌]

Good morning, Mauricio 🍂

Blessed-be your New Year.
Life seems to work so much better when lived amongst a team of true friends (not the fair weather only kind), and being alone can become quite isolated from happiness and losing the warm feeling a sense of belonging brings.
I've enjoyed the smooth rhythm of your lines, with spot-on linebreaks, emotional punch, and meaningful diction (check spelling L5: dessert or desert?).

Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking piece! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah it's a nut in a shell.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, you've made some good points.

[D. Mansfield]

as we get older friendships are valued in a different way, more i think. I liked this poem, thank you for sharing

[Mauricio Montoya]

I wrote this because when we realize we're old and the smlle in our with scorned and all we wanted is to be friends
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with a little love ❤️

[Mauricio Montoya]

Typo, Thier smlle in our love comes with scorned again thank you for a good write.

[Chris Shaw]

Friendship is a wonderful gift to be celebrated Mauricio, I have to agree with you dear poet.

Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you dear friend

[Soren]

We all long for solidarity and as social animals we need others. Banishment has long been a punishment equal to the death sentence. People do not exist alone.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.