tragic drop

tragic drop

A Chapter by CHRIS ANDES
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..cold summer...

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my heart is melting
as rain does in every fall
drowned in tragedy.




© 2012 CHRIS ANDES


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CHRIS ANDES
..I wanna hear your thoughts
=]

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simple yet very sad and emotional. beautiful write!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice play on this.
I've always found rain to be hopeful & spiritual.

Posted 11 Years Ago
It tugs at the heartstrings. Very simple, but a lot of emotion is conveyed. I like it. I especially love the picture you've posted with it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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CHRIS ANDES

11 Years Ago

haha, thanks I've just googled it
=]
The Pain Stays Fresh

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

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 Added on July 12, 2012
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