Fast Food Society

The clocks ticking

Minds left by some screen

The lines we push

Hearts we shove

The gratifying meal

Wrapped up in sulfate

The fast wires

Reaching you anytime of day

A caffeine version

of papers flying in the air

Speed dating

Tindering along 

The LOL of our BRB

even words have shortened

No slow down signs

in this madness of fast food souls

the malnutrition

of the heart 

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

What will really bite my French fry is that some will think this is actually all about fast food, and the gist will go unappreciated. This is quite brilliant, and taken there by the last two lines..Just brilliant.
Thanks for sharing this 100/100

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind support :)

[Antoñyo]

you're welcome

[outspoken1234]

Very good writing. I work in fast food and you caught it perfectly. Thank you for having me read this.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind visit

[Einstein Noodle]

oh i like it ...sharp social commentary ..just the right sarcasm ..and wonderful closing lines ... "malnutrition of the heart" ...right on right on right on! the technology of our world is absolutely a two edged sword ... you should try this in an editorial page ;)
E.

[Nisreen]

I hope i get a column one day .... my dream is the new yorker .....
Thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

no kidding!! God bless you in that Nisreen!! truly! :)

[Nisreen]

God bless you too Dear E

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..............

[Elmarie]

There is nothing better than a home cooked meal and a hug from an attentive friend. It's true what you say about the ways we live and Jacob's review speaks true. Thank you for your valued insight. Keep up the good work.

[Nisreen]

Thank You ........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the heart stays famished because the mind and body want instant gratification in this world of technology and sped up processes...

j.

[Nisreen]

So true
Thank you J

[Lyn Anderson]

I am glad I popped in to read this feature. Wonderful commentary on today's world. I am trying, and learning, to slow down and take a breath. That's hard sometimes when everything happens at top speed.

[Nisreen]

I just disconnect
Thank you for your review :)