Serenity

And when I saw,there was no tide,

but the tranquility of my lake,

I realized, there is no need,

for nothing there is need

All I have, is all in me,

The silence tells enough,

but you are there

and so am I,

thus quietly we speak...

Reviews

[Emily B]

so very beautiful, thankful to be able to be here

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Thank you Emily :) I am thankful to have you by

[Pryde Foltz]

So beautiful … there is indeed no separation between any of us. Sublime write:)

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Thank you Pryde :) glad you liked it

[Alias]

this is so peaceful, and the final lines make it seem like we just get a glimpse, and that their conversation continues privately. Really nice!

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Thank you so much for stopping by, Allas :) I'm glad you found it peaceful

[An owl on the moon]

The tranquil light swifts so sweetly across your world, your words of life. I needed a little serenity today, and your words give peace, even in the silent places. So beautiful.

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Always good to see you, Craig :) Thank you and I am glad it offered you a breath

[Donald Meikle]

To speak without speaking,to know what is not said,to be so sure in each other that silence is soothing, and then to treat it so matter of factly, is enough to see serenity as normal.This is actually living in love and loving to live.

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Thank you, dear poet, for stopping by and leaving your warm reply

[wordman]

serenity.something we all look for but few ever reach it !
loved the write lynn..

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Thanks Ron (((you)))

[David Scott]

Is serenity granted or achieved? Maybe it is gifted after we do the work to get there? I'm not sure. Your poetry is an invitation to simply be serene however. Could it be so simple? Probably.
Thank you and bless you for this poetic offering.

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I think it's a gift that we don't have to work for, but always seem to work against. Humans complicate everything lol. Thank you so much for visiting, David :)

[Richard🖌]

Dear Lynn,
The sensation thoughts of serenity flowing through me gift is soothing to the senses … so smoothly you make it seem, although stirring, feeing it inside you, taking me there through the deft enchantment of your words.
Such a sweet thought — that we speak and feel with no words … I love it, Lynn! ⁓ Richard (Rascal)


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Thank you for your kind words, Richard

[Richard🖌]

You are so very welcome, Lynn, and I thank you for inspiring them.

[Cryingkate]

OK I'm starting to become real jealous.... Your serene Spirit is shouting ever so Quietly. So enticingly a quality I wish i had.
Reading your writes in such a state of sublime serenity makes me want to take my pic axe and go back to the woods chopping away at my wood- words :-)

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Don't be silly. Everyone has their own qualities. Individuality is beautiful, and I happen to like yours :)

[Cryingkate]

Really? Ok then lets trade.. HA ha ha...You write mine and I'll write yours...

[roarke]

the sublime, ancient communication before there were words. Serenity is in the knowing.

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indeed sir....exactly :)