Dear beloved

dear beloved, i wrote a letter to you
through this weathered time, the few things i never said
abiding in the hoax of seeing you again
tears down my neck, oh how could i forget
amidst everything we see, a fine line weaves,
where yearnings and reality dance like autumn leaves

lurking in the cascades of chaos,
your voice is still the one i hear.
And i still look for you to find what's real
every time i think of you, a little more i heal
u've been like the light in the midst of strife
And i hope i'll say this to you in some other life

Might i have been the one to calm the storm
Might i have been the one to keep you warm
Might i have been the one to light your way
Would you have stayed?
Would you have been ok?
Would you?

Silently, i scream out loud in this hue,
all the things i never said,
the things that fill me with dread.
So, i'll keep writing even if you're gone,
hoping you'll get my message from the blue.
Oh dear beloved, i wrote a letter to u,
hoping that it will find its way through.

Author's Note

For someone from beyond, you wish to see in another life.

Reviews

[not your muse]

thanks for the read request, grace. enjoyed the read.
my version:

everytime i think of you i drown
unable to go for the kill
knowing fully well this could be our last run-down

you didn't let me in
your cloak so here i am
standing outside like a clown

but i'm still here
waiting for you
to unpiece the pieces of you
that you choose to hide under your shawl

[grace]

I really appreciate you for taking part in this! These words are so beautiful and i just can feel them. They fully have the essence of what i tried to write down in my poem. Thank you so much.

[E.P. Robles]

I was thinking: Each time you cross my mind, I find myself submerged,
Incapable of taking decisive action,
Aware that this might be our final downfall.

You barred me entry,
Your concealment leaving me exposed,
I linger outside, resembling a fool.

Yet, I persist,
Patiently awaiting your embrace,
Yearning for you to reveal the fragments of yourself,
Concealed beneath the shelter of your shawl.

[grace]

These are so beautiful and you made it even better! I am so thankful for you to take part in this. I wish i could just pin this to come and read it whenever i want to.

[not your muse]

i beg to differ with "you made it even better", grace. while i do acknowledge that they did a good job expressing what i expressed in a more refined way that most people can resonate with, except me :p. but one thing is missing, and that's what i value most: the fun part, which is conveying things in an unusual way. i like that: concealed beneath the shelter of your shawl.

[E.P. Robles]

Yo, gotta say, your "made it even better" vibe, Grace, it's cool and all. They nailed expressing what I spat out, all classy and relatable for the masses, except yours truly, haha. But here's the sitch, something's missing, and what I vibe with most is the fun factor, you feel me? Like, spicing things up with a twist. I'm all about that: hiding stuff beneath the cozy vibes of your shawl, you know?

[grace]

I didn't mean that you made a blade of grass versions better. Everyone's way of conveying things is different and i respect both of you for that. What i meant is by being the part of this, you both made this whole thing better! So thank you for that.

[E.P. Robles]

I am okay. Sorry. I was writing another poem I just posted. Thank you so very much for texting. I love it so much to reach out to others that write.

[living lavender]

this piece was beautiful. longing. enchanting.
my favorite line were:
"lurking in the cascades of chaos,
your voice is still the one i hear."
~ and ~
"Silently, i scream out loud in this hue,"
{brilliant. emotionally organic.}

[grace]

This is so sweet! Thank you so much for reading my poem, dear friend. I feel elated that you called some of the lines as your favorite ones. Thanks for liking my poem :)

[E.P. Robles]

I have never done this before on this site but I will give a short reply: beautifully captures the essence of unexpressed feelings and the enduring impact of memories.

[grace]

Thank you so much for such a beautiful and positive review! It means a lot to me that you liked it :)

[Stu. T.H.]

Mails don't have wings, yet somehow one's words always seem to reach its destination by gliding on the whimsical strokes of wind, the kind that are born from the fuming of each hot breath we take, with each inhale - and exhale. Exhausted panting, excessive yearning. Life is short, yet filled with excessive suffering, and insufficient pandering. We should take chances when we can, and still could. Perhaps keep writing is a good idea, as to remind us not to forget the detriment of our limitations and mortal mistakes. And hopefully, amends are given.
Overall, a great read, author grace. Thank you for sharing.
- Dan Rastley.

[grace]

Wow. Everything you said just touched me in a way. Your words are beautiful! And i'm grateful to have people like you to read my poems. Thank you so much for taking the time to give your insightful review on it and appreciating my work :)

[grace]

Also, I am beyond grateful to you for adding it to your favorites. Your sweet gestures really made my day.

[E.P. Robles]

You made me happy. It will last through the day. Thank you so kindly.

[Soren]

A feeling that many of us get sometime in our lives. A yearning to communicate beyondc our own existence to someone we once knew. Very nicely done

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading it! I am glad you liked it. It means a lot!

[Chris Shaw]

Dear grace this is a beautiful heartfelt write. Relatable too. I have written on this subject myself. Things I wish I Said. So important not to stay silent. We never know what!s on the cards and we can end up regretting our lack of voice.

Chris

[grace]

Thank you from the bottom of my heart, dear Chris! Reading a review from u really makes my day better. You've always been such a generous reader of mine. I am grateful to u for giving your insightful review on my poem :)

[BEST]

Amazing poem
There is someone I wish to see just to say sorry and I was a fool to let go. Maybe in my next life we'll meet

[grace]

Thank you so much for appreciating my work. This is a big compliment for me that you can relate with my poem. I'm grateful.

[BEST]

Me too. It is such an amazing piece. I really liked it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and me...oh there are several someones...I hope to see again...just to express how much they meant this time around...
j.

[grace]

I know there are always those people who mean so much to us, but we can never tell them bcoz we're just afraid that we'll freak out and they'll go away. But sometimes, circumstances take the away and we just wish we could've stated our minds before. Thank you so much for reading my poem! It means a lot to me

[The_Ancient_Rock]

That was truly beautiful...
Keep it up!
Blessed be!

[grace]

Thank you so much dear friend for reading it! I kinda wished to dedicate it to you. I hope u're ok.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you so much...
That is very kind of you.
I am fine, now that I have met you...read moreThank you so much...
That is very kind of you.
I am fine, now that I have met you...
Thanks again friend.
Blessed be!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Once again thank you so much...
Your words move me deeply...
It was very kind of you.
Be well, Blessed be!!!

[nadia dmitri]

I love the mix between literal and figurative, great job :)

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading and liking my poem :) It means a lot