(85) Hello Beautiful

Always tell her you love her.

Stop crying my sweet
You burnt the dinner
And it has got you down
Come here for a hug
Listen to what I say

Hello Beautiful

Don't you worry now
That dress suits you well
Never mind about others
Of what they might think
Because in my eyes I say

Hello Beautiful

From that very first day
I still feel the same way
Every moment I see you
Every day I am with you
Every time we make love

I say...

Hello beautiful


copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

When ever I say hello beautiful she says, I'm not beautiful get your eyes checked. Whenever I say the dress looks great on you, she tells me how fat she thinks she is and holds her belly out and says "see". If I chose to say nothing then I am told that I don't think she is beautiful or sexy anymore. It is like trying to catch a kite in the middle of the storm that never remains still enough to be caught. Sometimes I want to give up a no win situation but she is too beautiful to give up on inside and out.

Great write.

[HB]

Thank you for the smile. :-)

[northern monkey]

Well done Chris. Another timeless fable we should all heed.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Such a loving and tender write, Chris.. beautifully done!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct and loving! A sweet treat indeed!
Light,
Siddartha

[Bloody Ceca]

when he say: "Hello Beautiful" i see the meaning in the poem.. Very nice..

[Ashley]

a truly wonderful write about the dynamics between man and woman in love. well done.

[.]

LOL to spoken words comments...that's the beauty of a woman..youre damned if you do and damned if you don't...this was sentimental and sweet..and she is a lucky lady :)

[Janice Ann]

This is what every woman/man should read. This was beautiful and sweet and the truth about love, and what you see when you look upon your loved one! Wonderfully written!

[Eric Cox]

Very nice romantic piece, good job. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, a look back at the ideal American family. Like an advertisement that Kellogg might use, the typical and loving. Great imagery and memory, well done.