Revolving Theory

Revolving Theory

A Poem by Pax









Time is just an illusion

A manifestation of our creation

I often wonder the flip side of space dimension

The revolving theory of our imagination.

© 2012 Pax


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I have so often had this thought myself, Willyam. Time, though concrete because we have made it so, it purely up to our own perception. We count based on the setting of the sun and the rise of the moon, but who is to say what time actually is? Time is relative. I love this. It is somewhere between poetry and science...which I suppose is the definition of imagination. Well done, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brandon S. Whitten

11 Years Ago

I prefer divine madness. 3 nuts from the same tree:)
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11 Years Ago

Little minions...divine madness.....I will accept either :)
Pax

11 Years Ago

divine madness... i also like it...



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I've always thought of time as an idea... not exactly "real" per say... Cool interpretation to the picture. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore this, as I'm a person who has issues with time.. even wrote about it far in my large library here...pfff...
Someday you maybe find it... if it's not too dusty lol
This is wonderful, This is full of your shimmer thoughts,
Within your pearly wisdom, and truth, I admire. Thanks my friend.

E.L.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the picture is very much a sky and clouds fantasy and i liked how you explored the concept of time in your poem and the link to space and creativity which i think is a nice reflection of the picture.where would we be without imagination? fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow... short.. but direct to the point :) you makes us think what it is meaning :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr gred

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me think, hard. Again your nice qualities are apparent and I love the picture (deviantart?)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

yup, i found it in deviantart(in my favorites(photominipulation category)).
its a theoretical.. read more
Katherine Enma Pineapple

11 Years Ago

lol I heard physics is hard :D I also find a lot of ideas in theories to be interesting but is bored.. read more
I love pictures...I love art...it inspires my third eye for almost every writing that I do. You did justice to this surreal imagery.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece evokes a great amount of thought and belief in a few amount of words. Such a thing is a challenge, and you rose to the occasion. Great write, i enjoyed it a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish I could see the picture; it would add more illumination to the poem. But you're right: time is only an illusion in this dimension; it might not be so on the other side...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

i just put the picture marie, i think it depends on the browser because in firefox it didnt appear.<.. read more
Marie

11 Years Ago

And it's a lovely picture.
last line is really somethin cool

Posted 11 Years Ago


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