Life’s trouble

Life’s trouble

A Chapter by Pax
"

a 7 word poem....

"

The exit

to

Life’s trouble

is

Patience



© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
share your thoughts my friends...

i need alot of patience right now....

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Wow! In just 7 words you made a perfect quote.

I agree. It's not easy to get away with life's trouble. It needs more time...and more patience.

So I should tell it to myself, too. Patience...

Nice one. Sort of self-reflection. Thanks for this, Pax. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

thanks Dhaye.... i need it more of this now... stretching to the limit... :)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)



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Patience is never my virtue. =). while i agree that patience could bring good results, such good result could be made possible when patience is coupled with a good/careful foresight. =) nice quote pax!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

often times doc Gab, I am to hasty at my decision making... so i never would have many of this at ha.. read more
gabrielle

6 Years Ago

welcome =)
i get the idea here , its philosophical i like it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! In just 7 words you made a perfect quote.

I agree. It's not easy to get away with life's trouble. It needs more time...and more patience.

So I should tell it to myself, too. Patience...

Nice one. Sort of self-reflection. Thanks for this, Pax. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

thanks Dhaye.... i need it more of this now... stretching to the limit... :)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Love the fact that you haven't used "Love' in the place of "Patience".

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, it's one of the exits anyway...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OY! along with good decision making...True...but hard to do....Endure...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes you always have to be patient and stay positive even when it seems impossible :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I'm not sure I entirely agree, patience without action can be detrimental, but patience in action is something I would consider vital.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax

7 Years Ago

i like that...very much insightful of you my friend..thanks
i could sure use a lot of that right now

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patience does help us cope with life's troubles. This is one of those poems that you can spend hours playing with, substituting different words in various places to see what happens. Interesting and fun.

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