Chapter 5: My Last Song For You

Chapter 5: My Last Song For You

A Chapter by Pax
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the image is illustrated by my Friend ~ they were in a acoustic restaurant near the beach with an open view

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Mr. Bone : here we are Less. Isn't nice here with the view of the ocean and a acoustic band playing. and Thanks for this morning. I had a great time.
Ms. Lessie : Yeah, no problem. But before that we must eat first.

------ after eating....

Ms. Lessie : Can you sing now.
Mr. Bone : Ok, I'm ready.
Ms. Lessie : Hey waiter. Can we request that my friend here to sing. Now that the band is on break. Is that ok? He will just use the piano.
waiter : Sure why not.
Ms. Lessie : Ok Bone, go up there and sing for us.

author's note ~ play the song while reading ~ he was singing this song while his thought were somewhere else....


Words came as my voice follows the rhythm of the song I'm playing
While my heart and mind are somewhere else
               Searching
               Remembering
               Touching
               My deepest pain I wish to forget…


I sing this song for you
My last song for you
Starting from today
              I will live my life my way
It's hard because of the pain
I carry the pain of my own doing
I love you
          But you don't love me anymore
I wish you the best
I'm sorry
    Sorry is all I could ever say
To channel this pain
To a song I sing for you
Because this will the last time I will ever sing just for you.


© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
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Nicely composed scene; very emotional song.
Impressive chapter, Pax!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Pax

10 Years Ago

thanks mr. Frank... I'm glad you enjoyed this :)
(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Pax

10 Years Ago

wow ` ANOTHER PRICELESS SMILE :) thank you for this :)
oh shoot, I shouldn't have listened to that song! But it fits perfectly here :) I can see him just as you described awesome job..maybe you should be a director :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax

11 Years Ago

a director... i haven't think of that... i will add that to my bucket list....
though for now .. read more
super nice song and place near the beach... even feel sadness in all atmosphere here, as if he don`t know where he is..or maybe he will get job soon as singer in the restaurant :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax

11 Years Ago

this is much like a stage play here... to be honest its hard to expressed it
and i need a son.. read more
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Brilliant chapter! I love the song/poem that ended this chapter. It sounds so nice and is brimming with emotions:))

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A amazing chapter. I like the scenery and the music in the chapter. The song gave the chapter a sad feel. Thank you for the outstanding chapter.
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