So Very Strange

So Very Strange

A Poem by Wondering Mind

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We’re very strange, indeed.
       We solve debt with more debt,
                     we want Peace from War,
                         and solve hunger with greed.
   So very strange, indeed

© 2009 Wondering Mind




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but when our words meet metal, I believe we will change the world still

Posted 9 Years Ago


this so rings true.....i love the poem's truth very nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think this is great. It's not too long, but it gets the point across very, very well. My favorite line was "we wage wars while parading Peace"
This is a great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Stark reality. The way of the world. Why, I wonder, upon seeing in black and white, the truth has so much more power to turn the stomach.

Strange indeed, my friend. I must always try to keep in mind that the people are not the "government." Even here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nicely penned write N O so true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Can it get any stranger than all that!


[we] feed hunger with greed

Ah, a very brilliant line,

This is very excellently written with great sounding, all in all...yet written with fewer lines..
the message is tinkling with truth!! Shared a great piece!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


succint and deep, powerful and neccessary.
:=) thx for your comment on my small poem.


Posted 11 Years Ago


You certainly have summed up our current "state of affairs".....borrow more to pay debt, take more to pay debt, make war to bring peace, and if we weren't so greedy, we would certainly have less hungry people......well stated!
Sheila

Posted 11 Years Ago


So much understanding in a small powerful poem! Wonderful penmenship friend!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago



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