Without You

Without You

A Poem by wordman

 



 



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe i`m just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man...

© 2021 wordman


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so powerful
i enjoyed this so much
you are gifted sir
thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
I enjoyed the energy and the drive in the words my friend.
"My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,
without you babe i`m just a drop in the sand,"
I did like the above lines. When someone make us crazy. We do need them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thanks for the read my friend
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
I agree with Shelley, this would make a beautiful love song. I also agree, there are no others, can be no others, will not look at nor can be with no other when you love like this, and only those who have loved like this knows it. Warm bodies can not replace.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Sounds like a special love song.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading
I love how you write with passion and deep affection. Lines are beautiful from the beginning till the end. I guess you are also influenced by the beauty around you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thanks sammi,appreciate your review
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

My pleasure sir Wordman.
"can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.



My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,"

Posted 2 Years Ago


"my heart is blind.



No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,"

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I read something Amazing! 🤗

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

hope it works out for you
.

2 Years Ago

Yay! ...its working ☺🤗

I guess you're as romantic as you write.

.. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

more so,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
A lovely piece of devoted poetry
someone is obviously deeply
in love..so well written and nicely
expressed in poetic verse..

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you fran
You see,
true love paralyzes the mind,
there could never be another,
my heart is blind.

The above stanza was my favorite. It spoke volumes. Nice write. Tyfs



Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading

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 wordman
wordman

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