Watchers

black moon unseen gives

way to a cold dark night of

shadows hiding from view,

moving through the night watching

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An image of scudding clouds across a blackened sky are conjured in this dark portrayal of sleeplessness.

[Willard Wells]

I appreciate your time in reading and commenting.

[Hebe]

The night always has shadows and most of our darkest thoughts come at night.... great piece!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my work. I work in the shadows often.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

shadows do watch---and i think they are the shadows of selves who don't want to see the real them...

very stunning poem, concise but finding such a mood.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Jacob for your kind words and taking time to view my work. Greatly appreciated.

[Lorry]

Perfectly captured words for what to most is an incomprehensible feeling beyond darkness.

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Nemo for the words and visit.

[Valentine]

When it is cloudy and dismal out, the moon and stars would be a welcome sight. Scary thought. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Thank you dear lady for taking time to visit my works of darkness.

[Ana Papaya]

Very eerie, this is like a scene from an old b/w vampire movie.
The shadows are extra scary...

[Willard Wells]

Appreciate your visit and comments. last Friday's black moon got me to this point.

[Ana Papaya]

Appropriately eerie as we head into Halloween...