(Sound) Asleep

(Sound) Asleep

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Spontaneous. Perhaps a little gooey lol

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I slept
listening to the sound
of your rhythmic breaths,

and your snores,
my customized lullaby. 


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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This was truly filled with the joy that love brings over those who will only listen. There is something so sweet about a lover's music... breathing softly... snoring even... every sound of a lover reminds us that we are home... we are safe... we are in the world where we belong. So beautiful, dear Yumna... May that lullaby sing over you always. x

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, Craig. Always appreciated. x



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Thankfully my wife does not snore. I think I would sleep in another room if she did! On the other hand, I suppose there are worse sounds that lovers generate. Personally, I cannot sleep and listen.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Hahah maybe I'll have to change my mind on that too ;P
Lol thanks so much for reading, Jibey!.. read more
Dr Y. When my husband is next snoring loudly, which he does frequently, I will remind myself of your loving words :) I hope they soften my heart.

My customized lullaby is memorable.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'm glad I made you think differently, even if for a while. :) Thank you so much for appreciating th.. read more
This was truly filled with the joy that love brings over those who will only listen. There is something so sweet about a lover's music... breathing softly... snoring even... every sound of a lover reminds us that we are home... we are safe... we are in the world where we belong. So beautiful, dear Yumna... May that lullaby sing over you always. x

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, Craig. Always appreciated. x
You've made the most mundane of habits a poetic pleasure!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Lately, I've found love isn't really a complex thing when it comes to feeling what you feel for the .. read more
what a line..."my customized lullaby" especially when paired with the preceding...

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I just thought about it while writing and wasn't really sure on how it would be taken, but I'm glad .. read more

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