London Olympics

London Olympics 2012 spread new hopes

London  Olympics

Inspire a generation

World welcomes warmly 

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

Lovely senryu! It irks me when people call pieces such as these a haiku. Haikus relate strictly to nature; a senryu, human nature and events. This is a great SENRYU. Anyway, it seems pieces about current events are few and far inbetween. Thank you for sharing.

[zainul]

Hi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senryu.
I have to learn more.
I need your support.
Happy Olympics!!!

[Elizabeth Kerns]

Haikus do not relate strictly to nature. And human nature is still nature.

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Falling Leaf.]

I took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly related to nature. Senryu is human natures and events. 5-7-5 is everything in between.

[Marie]

What about abstract concepts?

[Falling Leaf.]

Give an example?

[Marie]

justice...truth..hatred...

[Falling Leaf.]

I would call those human nature, would you???

[Marie]

Yes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it is.

[Falling Leaf.]

I hate losing a poem. :'(

[Ziara]

Short, sweet and straight to the point, so true and touches us all as lots of countries join together to prove each and everyones spirits and strengths.
Really nice

[zainul]

Thank you Ziara for the admiring review and compliments.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Myra]

In words so few, your statement is very true!

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely and inspiring review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Speak in Silence]

This is so very true. I love how your writing is short but means so much :) great piece :)

[zainul]

Thanks for your lovely compliments and admiring review.
Enjoy the Olympics.
There are so many wonderful things.
Hope you may take part in any event of the Olympics some day.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Speak in Silence]

Haha you're welcome :) Happy Olympics to you also! :D

[zainul]

Thank you sooooooooooooooooo much!

[Speak in Silence]

lol You're very welcome :)

[zainul]

You're very welcome too :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this since I sometimes watch the Olympics. Even though I haven't in awhile. The world always enjoy watching it that's for sure. It's entertaining. Again, nice job :)



Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[zainul]

Thank you,Ashley Rivers.I adore your wonderful review.
It will inspire all fans of the Olympics.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're very welcome! I hope it does inspire them. Haha :)

[zainul]

:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Captures the moment so well

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,John.
Your amazing review inspires me immensely.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[JanieB]

Positive, and powerful words wrapped up in a great haiku.

[zainul]

Thanks for the inspiring review.
Your use of the words "wrapped up in a great haiku" sounds awesome.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[JanieB]

You're very welcome :) Thanks for the compliment. x

[EGabriellS]

I don't see works like this very often. I like it. Thank you for sharing it with me. :) I know I welcomed the Olympics very warmly.

[zainul]

I am very glad to read your amazing review.It is my pleasure that I could pick up a subject which is liked by a great many of people.I do feel that many members of WC love Olympics like you and their aspiration should
be addressed in this forum to some extent.
Thanks for your inspiring compliments.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[reflectingus]

Hah, timing, my friend. Perfect timing. I was instantly intrigued by the topic. Short and to-the-point, yes, the world watches Olympics.

[zainul]

Thank you, Reflectus for your thoughtful comment and wonderful review.Really timing is a very important factor for all activities.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Patricia B. Hepler]

'World welcomes warmly'. Staccato (sp?) words. A wonderful poem to 'spread new hopes'... Excellent, pat

[zainul]

Hi,Patricia,adore your admiring and inspiring review.
Thanks for the compliments too.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Elizabeth Kerns]

It's good. c:

[zainul]

Thanks.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!