London Olympics

London Olympics 2012 spread new hopes

London  Olympics

Inspire a generation

World welcomes warmly 

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

Lovely senryu! It irks me when people call pieces such as these a haiku. Haikus relate strictly to nature; a senryu, human nature and events. This is a great SENRYU. Anyway, it seems pieces about current events are few and far inbetween. Thank you for sharing.

[zainul]

Hi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senryu.
I have to learn more.
I need your support.
Happy Olympics!!!

[Elizabeth Kerns]

Haikus do not relate strictly to nature. And human nature is still nature.

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Falling Leaf.]

I took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly related to nature. Senryu is human natures and events. 5-7-5 is everything in between.

[Marie]

What about abstract concepts?

[Falling Leaf.]

Give an example?

[Marie]

justice...truth..hatred...

[Falling Leaf.]

I would call those human nature, would you???

[Marie]

Yes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it is.

[Falling Leaf.]

I hate losing a poem. :'(

[SuicidePact.]

says so much, with such little. I really liked this.

[zainul]

I adore you for the lovely review,Jenna.
Thanks for your compliments.
I am glad to know that you liked it.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Owlgirl]

Great job!

[zainul]

Thanks for great review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Owlgirl]

thanks :)

[quixotic_rose]

This is awesome, I love its simplicity and that it gets straight to the point without me having to delve deep into the words or reading inbetween the lines. Great job!

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful review.
It has relaxed me thinking I never want to hide the essence of the poem.
My most sincere love and thanks are kept here for your kind acceptance.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[quixotic_rose]

:) to you as well!

[Riley]

Short, simple, sweet, and honest. This is a great poem for the start of the Olympics, and everyone can relate to it!

[zainul]

Thanks for your sincere and admiring review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[TPK Stories]

short and sweet...nice inspiration

[zainul]

Thanks for your admiring review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[TPK Stories]

Wish you a happy Olympics too

[zainul]

Very nice of you.

[Helena]

A very timely piece at an exciting time. Let's hope and pray that everyone stays safe and takes part in the spirit of what the Olympics stand for. Very nice write zainul, thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!

[zainul]

Thanks you Helena for your inspiring review.
I join my heart with you to pray for the safety of all people involved with the Olympics .
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Helena]

Yaaay!!! Happy Olympics everyone!!

[zainul]

Yaaay!!! Happy Olympics everyone!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Nice work! Very inspiring. I love the London olympics! It just encourages strength ~
Beautiful poem. =D

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review.
Really Olympics encourage us to be strong.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

No problem! Yesh. it does.
Thank you! Same to you also!

[zainul]

Very nice of you.

[Michael G.]

Well penned thought. Good insight.

[zainul]

Hello Michael,
I am grateful for your lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Michael G.]

You, also sir. I saw your team march into the stadium. You were brought to my mind. National pride becomes world pride when you have friends around the world.

[zainul]

I feel honored for your kind gesture.
I am happy that you saw our team while marching into the stadium.
I agree with you about national pride that becomes world pride.
I am very pleased to thank you sir for your special attention on me.

[Michael G.]

Honored, also.

[zainul]

Very nice of you,Sir.

[EileenMarie]

What a nice tribute :)

[zainul]

Thanks for the great review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!

[Zainab UF]

It's amazing how a sporting event (that word is sorely inadequate) can bring people together!

Yes, the Olympics maybe inspiring, but I don't think they can inspire a whole generation, with the exception of maybe a few stalwarts. I won't keep my hopes up though. I was blabbing about greats in the Olympic history and all of my classmates were like, "Who's Nadia Comaneci?"

I fear for the future of the planet.

[zainul]

Thanks for your review and wonderful opinion.
I am always optimistic and feel that every individual has her/his liberty to view any event.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!