Tree

feelings of a tree...

    

I am alive D****t

I give you

 fruit

I give you fragrance

I give you home to live and grow

I give you shelter

I give you shadow

I give you fresh air

I give you different medicines

I give you all I have

Because of me you are alive

You give me suffocation

through pollution

You take my life 

by taking away water

You didn't give me the care I need

You only have the habit of cutting and

making money out of it

You didn't care about me

You only care about yourself

If I'm alive

You are alive

I am the Tree D****t. . .

Reviews

[jay-lyse]

Very important, and a unique topic. I like how open-minded you were. It almost sounded like an actual tree speaking. And I also liked how emotionally connected you were. Feeling the tree's pain, how it suffers and how we as humans sometimes abuse its importance without a second thought. Very Interesting!!!

[beautiful life]

important topic and you have written it well

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

I am a reviewer d****t :P

[Anuvart]

We should stop cutting trees ...right now!!
Nicely written again :)

[Hitman]

expressed well about a tree:)

[kaylynnmelody♥]

I love this!

[angelink]

This makes me sad :( Its true. We are human beings. We are selfish and foolish. We could stop alot of the damage to nature but we don't cause we're too lazy or some other reason.

[MoriartyMesa]

I enjoy the different view than what if normally given for a tree, a point of view that is rare and nice, little rough in the message. But over all nice work and wording.

[Abd-afeez]

Now i felt the piece vibrating due to poignancy. You've no doubt vividly expressed a feeling and its that of the used and that has no doubt made the piece very unique. I love this, keep writing my good friend.

[smarie]

This is a very unique topic,you did a really good job on this. I love the last three lines. In this piece it was almost like it was an actual tree speaking.

[Haunt]

*Smile* I thinks darling and fun.