Tree

feelings of a tree...

    

I am alive D****t

I give you

 fruit

I give you fragrance

I give you home to live and grow

I give you shelter

I give you shadow

I give you fresh air

I give you different medicines

I give you all I have

Because of me you are alive

You give me suffocation

through pollution

You take my life 

by taking away water

You didn't give me the care I need

You only have the habit of cutting and

making money out of it

You didn't care about me

You only care about yourself

If I'm alive

You are alive

I am the Tree D****t. . .

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jay-lyse]

Very important, and a unique topic. I like how open-minded you were. It almost sounded like an actual tree speaking. And I also liked how emotionally connected you were. Feeling the tree's pain, how it suffers and how we as humans sometimes abuse its importance without a second thought. Very Interesting!!!

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

love this!!!! this poem is great.

[Short.Nerd]

I love this!! :) I love the pictures too! They were a nice tough. Great job!:)

[Vital Signs 13]

I like this. It's an easy read, to the point and the idea was wonderful!

[kyrie]

I like this! It's so fun, so dignified. Great write.

[howlfjdks]

Trees have rights, thanks for standing up for them; without them what would we climb?

[Crayon]

Lovely. I love how you gave the tree emotions. And normally we think of trees as flowy and as bending in the wind. I like that this tree has a backbone, so to speak. Great job.

[Amy Bumpas]

Such powerful, strong words, and yes, we as people don't
seem to pay attention to the little things...that of a tree...
just to browse upon her beauty, look up into the leaves and
just be in wonder. Yes, I have did this...magical...

[sarah]

wow this is really great! I love the pictures!