Tree

feelings of a tree...

    

I am alive D****t

I give you

 fruit

I give you fragrance

I give you home to live and grow

I give you shelter

I give you shadow

I give you fresh air

I give you different medicines

I give you all I have

Because of me you are alive

You give me suffocation

through pollution

You take my life 

by taking away water

You didn't give me the care I need

You only have the habit of cutting and

making money out of it

You didn't care about me

You only care about yourself

If I'm alive

You are alive

I am the Tree D****t. . .

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jay-lyse]

Very important, and a unique topic. I like how open-minded you were. It almost sounded like an actual tree speaking. And I also liked how emotionally connected you were. Feeling the tree's pain, how it suffers and how we as humans sometimes abuse its importance without a second thought. Very Interesting!!!

[ice]

"I am the Lorax, I speak for the trees.
I speak for the trees, for the trees have no tongues,.."
(Dr. Seus)

I am a poet, who speaks for the trees.
I write for the trees, because the trees can't hold pens.
(Ashkat)

Wonder filled verse, and wonderful selection of pictures.
enjoyed
ice

[iamkim]

Tree has come to speak atlast! Good poem. I hope people would think about it. How cruel we have been to nature? We didn't even think how we could live without them... It's so sad.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

I speak for the tree's. I speak for Creation and all that dwell within. Life is sacred and even light itself is alive. Awesome poem. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me.
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[jessica Wray]

it is sad but really true

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are true. Nature is alive. We don't take care about nature. We will pay. Her fresh air she create and food she provide will be the end of man also. I like the strong and true emotion of this poem. Trees are alive! A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Katseye]

Very nice... point comes across well. Good work

[Chris38]

I love trees and in fact wrote a story from the point of view of a tree. This was really well written.

[Stef Outsiders]

aww this is sad but so very true, I really felt this. I love trees... trees were his before us, they should be left alone... they are part of the planet! it's like plucking a hair of our arm... it feels...
love this poem!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

The top photo reminds me of the tree from 'Fern Gully'. I agree, trees are necessary. I love my neighborhood in Anchorage, 100's of Birch and Spruce trees. Early May is very pretty, and not too many Mosquitoes yet.
Real nice poem.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I really liked this original take on deforestation with the point of view from the tree I haven't read anything like this before and i'm glad you sent a RR for it because It faultless Thank you for sharing

100/100