Scent Of First Love

Scent Of First Love

A Poem by Gullia King

The rain started to drizzle.
Meanwhile she waits, with her heavy heart in her hands.
Wondering if he'll shatter it in to a million pieces or place it gently in his chest. 
She tells herself, being broken can lead to something magical.
She takes a deep breath, closes her eyes and goes back to her first scent of love. 
She can't help but smile sweetly at memories of them dancing beneath the moonlight. 
When all their troubles went away like a blow in the wind. 
And the galaxies in her eyes were far more beautiful than the stars in the night sky. 
She opens her eyes and sees him.  



© 2017 Gullia King



WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.

Author's Note

Gullia King
Something short and simple. I really want to make this piece longer. Let me know what you think.



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"first scent of love.
She can't help but smile sweetly at memories of them dancing beneath the moonlight."

Gorgeous with so many lovely lines. Enjoyed....:)...............

Posted 4 Months Ago


Beautiful work of intimacy and togetherness.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This was such a sweet lovely writing, I love the true feelings and the real emotions behind these words.

Well wrote :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wow this was a very sweet and touching piece! Wonderfully written, I quite enjoyed it :) thank you for sharing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soft and tender led readers to deep thoughts and real emotion. First love. Always with us and never forgotten. Thank you dear Gullia for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


"being broken can lead to something magical" i soo love this line xD its sooo cute and deep at the same time.
This is literally me when ever i like someone !!
I love it

Posted 4 Months Ago


To me it could be a continuation should you write further; an examination into what the reality was after the eyes opened. The writing to me patterns a continuation somewhere between a heart shattering and first love. You could also go to the extremes in one direction or the other (completing shattered) or (complete bliss).

Posted 4 Months Ago


i think alluring is a good word to describe this and your writes. when we open our hearts we become vulnerable but that is where the best is (as you mention with 'memories'). we protect and remember. we mend the pieces of a broken heart and love again because we long for that feeling of being in love. sometimes it finds us, perhaps even when least expected. beautiful pic. can see the romantic interlude taking place there.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This is truly awesome to read..wonderful beautifully penned

Posted 4 Months Ago


It was enchanting to read.... truly beautifully written.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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