A colours choir sang vibrantly

A colours choir sang vibrantly

A Poem by Gee
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Spring

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Heads bowed as if in deference
the daffodils they swayed,
whilst dappled light through dancing trees
upon the lush grass played.

A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown.

The thin veiled mists of early morn'
that washed the world with white,
cede to the over eager sun
days ever warm and bright.

A colours choir sang vibrantly
from life that bloomed anew,
to celebrate the birth of Spring
now another winter through.



© 2018 Gee



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Daffs dance for me in our garden right now > Snowdrops are gone - crocuses also
Maple tree is in bud as is the climbing rose

Birds are collecting their nest building bits

These are the pictures your poems is building in my minds eye as I read
I wish this site would accept my videos with spring flowers flowing as in our garden
Then you could add your words to it

Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Good morning. Thank you.
I love this time of the year, spirits are lifted by both the warming.. read more
WOW! WOW! And WOW! This is one of the best spring poems I've ever read! I love it! So many dynamic descriptions where you personify all the plants and other players. The first 2 lines of both the 1st & 2nd stanzas -- banging! Some of the best imagery I've ever read! So playful & uninhibited & originally-stated! This makes me want to romp naked in a field of wildflowers! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Thanks Margie I’m blushing. Some times the words fall right, some times not. Glad you enjoyed.
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The true poet in you shines through brilliantly ( Sorry I have no wise remarks to add) in this poem!
( actually even when you are extremely naughty too you write perfect poetry). Loved the A colours choir sang vibrantly.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Ach, away wi ya. You'll have me believing you.
Seriously, I appreciate each and every review .. read more
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

I do too, love the little chats with you( brings the best in me?????).
This is just breathtaking! i love it


Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you Norah
A you tease! Spring seems like land far off and stormy seas to cross to get there still. But we can dream as you paint what IS to come Gee.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gee

8 Months Ago

Thank you John
Beautiful poem, the promise of spring.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gee

8 Months Ago

Cheers....
Sometimes I wish that I could leave less than twenty-five freaking characters as a review (or perhaps a simple emoji)....for I can't think of anything to say about this except.........wow!

(....."days ever warmer, bright".....this is a great line, only, I can't help but pick out the small detail of "days ever warmER" ultimately meaning "bright" would become "brighter"....however "days ever warm [and]"....that's what would elicit "bright"....gotta have some concordance in your words....or it's not only incorrect grammatically, it sounds rather awkward). Well done!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you, changes made. It is good that you both enjoy and improve my scribbles when you visit. Thi.. read more
Simple stuff from a simple mind you say. My arse!
This follows a tradition and adds immesurably to it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ken Simm.

1 Year Ago

Nah that doesn't work either.
Ken Simm.

1 Year Ago

See me after prep.
Gee

1 Year Ago

Mmmmmmmmm, guess I'm just lucky the right words sometimes fall in a pleasing way..
There is something very exciting when the flowers appear. It's like the sign for, take some lairs of clothes off. If only nature could keep the garden clean over the winter.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Cheers Paul
Almost Robert Frost-ery. Very nice. ..."bluebell sea". That's a new description of the deep blue sea and perfect for this ode to spring.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Oh Mr Frostery, if only. Thank you

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Added on July 27, 2016
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Tags: Winter, spring, Sun, daffodils

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Gee
Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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