Dance under the rainbow

Just a dream + imagination...

When the rain stopped
The clouds kept calm
A rainbow arose
With the sun having charm...

Birds sang euphonious songs
As I sat upon a rock
The soil was enriched
And my enthusiasm awoke...

I walked by the tall trees
When water droplets fell over me
I managed to look above
And the unclouded sky I could see...

When the seven colours of rainbow
Splashed before my eyes
I walked further and lost myself
As the bond that nature ties...

Next moment I found you holding my hand
It felt like a place of wonder
Hope flashed back into the soul
When sky grew dark again and it began to thunder...

You and me, under the open sky
While the heavy rain made our hearts fonder
Staring at each other for sometime
Holding hands, dancing together...

Author's Note

Please dip into my imaginations and begin to dream............

Reviews

[Ashish]

I am looking for this which can make your day...
Beautiful & Heart-melting poem on the Sundayyyy...

Thank you very much for sharinggggg..... :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

just a dream plus imagination... don't knw if this will ever be a reality... haha... and yep, thank u for all ur reviews...
for the first time I've got 12 reviews at a time in the mrng which was a big surprise in a Sunday!!;
thnk u!!!

[Ashish]

My pleasure :)

[Nwang]

Somehow this reminds me of that old hindi movie song "Pyar hua ikrar hua." Nicely written. Good write.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Aww.. that's a nice song......
thank you...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Aww.. that's a nice song......
thank you...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Aww.. that's a nice song......
thank you...

[Nwang]

The pleasure is all mine :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Let's share among both of us then.....
my pleasure too... 😃

[Jibey]

It's a pleasure to get wet through with a lover... and somehow the rainbow is always there

[Anindita Janhabee]

Very true... Thank you dear for your review. Btw, your profile is rated mature I guess cause I wasn't able to view your writings.... anyway, I'm glad you liked my little piece....

[Jibey]

I'm not sure why you can't read my writings, unless you have put a block on mature profiles.

See if you are allowed to read this poem - Pale Primrose Sun - http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jibey/675699/

[Anindita Janhabee]

I hv found another way to read those rated ones... I'll be soon reading....
and yep thanks for the one... I'll check out soon...

[Jibey]

I hope you will tell me what you think and that you will enjoy some of the dreamy steamy writing

[Anindita Janhabee]

of course... without a second thought...

[Jibey]

Send me a message

[horizon]

I did it...chasing a rainbow...and when your loved one holds your hand you feel like completed...beautiful emotions and selection of words

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes... thank you for your time reading...
(pata hai no thanks but in terms of writing comment, I have promised someone to say thanks to all reviewers...)

[horizon]

Yup....I won't say no to it...