Uncertainty of destiny

Never certain...

People describe you
In a hundred ways -
Predetermined and confined,
Instant and constant,
Overhanging and impending,
Unavoidable and unchangeable...
You aren't known to me
Even when the world knows you.
You are a mystic spin for them
But a blind belief for me.
For some, you are looming in distance,
For me, just a choice.
Your existence may be a truth,
But it's hard for me to accept.
You determine who enters my life,
But only I decide who stays...
I hate you being ignorant
For you'll never let me do what I want,
Nor will you let me have what I desire.
You'll never let my path be simple
Cause you'll turn it complicated.
You may not let me need someone I admire,
Also may not let me fulfill my wishes...
You offer me nothing,
But my effort gifts me everything.
You made me meet someone as an accident,
But I do believe, we met for a reason.
You might be supreme,
might be supernatural,
But ordinary mind in me believes
That you're only a blind belief...

Author's Note

Written about destiny, which is always uncertain with me...

Reviews

[Chris A Jones]

I for one believe in destiny, to a certain degree anyway. We still have control of our destiny. I really enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the visit dear.......

[Chris A Jones]

You are welcome.

[Ashish]

The best part is "You determine who enters my life,
But only I decide who stays... "
Well! I believe in destiny. Something are predetermined and you have to pass through it. Some will break and some will make from it. that's all.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Even I do believe sometimes.....
ete saara reviews!!! oh god!!!!
i dnt knw how to react !
thanks for reading !!!!!

[Anindita Janhabee]

thnk u....lotssssss.

[Ashish]

Haha, so sweet of you

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is so enchantingly beautiful! True as well for me. Nice reading it ☺

[Anindita Janhabee]

I'm glad you could relate to yourself.... thank you for your time reading my work...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! The pleasure was mine ☺

[horizon]

Beautiful poetry...many expressions are depicted abt destiny... uncertainty is what called surprises or sometimes shock...;);)

[Anindita Janhabee]

very true...
thank you for the kind words...

[horizon]

Always my pleasure....u know that

[Anindita Janhabee]

yep I do😉

[Adam Adams]

"I hate you being ignorant
For you'll never let me do what I want,
Nor will you let me have what I desire.
You'll never let my path be simple
Cause you'll turn it complicated... "

very deep lines here. the consequences of love have you nice dripped down in words.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your review... and your time reading... I'm glad you liked it...

[Adam Adams]

the rest of your work will i be reading later tonight, in a few hours. a bit busy am i for now.

[Anindita Janhabee]

absolutely fine and thank you very much..

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

So true. I believe in destiny die hard. Everything happens with reason for sure. Beautiful Poem :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

yes, it does...
much glad for ur reviews...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Most welcome!!