Finding herself

Finding herself

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze







Jiggling down the lane, she laughs

She laughs so hard that she cries

 

Running down the lane, she falls 

She falls so hard that she flies

 

Stumbling across it, she finds

Finds something deep, she loses

 

 Desperate for breath, she binds

She binds so tight that she frees

 

As a free spirit she rise

Rises so sure that nothing defies.







 


© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze



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Jyoti_Ablaze
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As usual I drifted in your words, nice and delicate poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Salvatore. :)
Sometimes I wonder how do you manage to express the life in these words. I mean it so deep and sometimes we don't think about these side of coin... She fell so hard she flies... Yeah yo do flies my friend

Posted 7 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Months Ago

Thank you Deepak. We writers do have a knack to see stuff other than the ordinary, don't we? :)
Deepak K. Belbase

7 Months Ago

Your welcome dear!
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Cute piece. Keep up the good work

Posted 11 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
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This is a superb piece, I must say... I loved the harmony your words created! Good work ☺

Posted 11 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much, YumnaKay. Glad you visited!
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are welcome, Jyoti! A pleasure :)
I loved this! As said by others, I really liked the juxtaposition of the lines. They really contrast to one another that makes for me an enjoyable read. Also the content helps. I am a free spirit so this poem resonated deeply within me.

Good job.

Thanks for posting!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
I am glad it resonated with your spirit!
Good day!
Well, Im glad I came back at a good time to read this beauty of writing. I loved how it unwrapped total opposites in the actions itself. Very good, keep it up

Posted 11 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

I am glad that you visited and enjoyed my work.
Absolutely beautifully written! :)

Posted 12 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

12 Months Ago

Thank you, Gullia!
I like how you used imagery in the poem because it make it seem like I am actually there.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ko11. Your kind review made me really happy! It's an accomplishment!
Good day.
Jyoti, i promised to read your poem, "Saved", but I couldn't find it! So here I am.

This is a very lovely piece. The highlight of it is the changing flow of images as this girl passes through the full gamut of emotions. Very nicely done.

A very delicate poem. Simply worded but very well executed.

Ps. I just realised the poem was called, "Rescued"! Smh.....sorry! Will read that soon!:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

It's completely fine, Doodley, you can read it whenever you want. Please feel free to visit my humbl.. read more
quite unique-cum-interesting poetry!
seems more like a very proactive stuff you come to lick down this time... esp. in such paradox of enliven words.

it's, you know, always quite hard finding oneself in this so crowded world patched up with the cliches of thoughts, may be, it's cos... we're all being so unforbidden, & living life with such desolation. perhaps, "rising like a free-spirit.. from the ground... so as none could defy anymore"... is crucial thing to be understood for better living. inspirationally uplifting work. rhythmic patter's majestic as well, as always! nice imagery here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Adam. Humbled by your kind words.

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