Remember Frieda

Remember Frieda

A Poem by Neville Pettitt
"

I will leave it entirely up to you, at least for the time being.................

"

Remember Frieda


Why does she no longer submit fresh words here for us to consider

Why does she no longer leave a trace of herself   

behind     

I suspect because you frightened her

 away  

Just like you have so many

 others

Do you remember  

Frieda

?

 

 


© 2017 Neville Pettitt



Author's Note

Neville Pettitt
Not everyone here will understand or appreciate these words, but many of you will & of course, then there's you. We both know who you are

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I miss her more than the our special words: 'petulia' speaking manufactured italian.. and 'pinky' raised coffee mugs...

Giggles, laughter and tears shared whilst I learned how to grow up and cede to my damned fool inhibitions.

She's somewhere, flitting like a butterfly, lighting corners, watching and wating.. and - I'm sure, so sure - she knows she's loved.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

Me too & I'm sure you are write......



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nice lines,great work remember poem

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

Very kind, thank you shruthi
I miss her more than the our special words: 'petulia' speaking manufactured italian.. and 'pinky' raised coffee mugs...

Giggles, laughter and tears shared whilst I learned how to grow up and cede to my damned fool inhibitions.

She's somewhere, flitting like a butterfly, lighting corners, watching and wating.. and - I'm sure, so sure - she knows she's loved.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

Me too & I'm sure you are write......
sure do miss the Jersey Girl!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Hello stranger, I knew you would too jacob...
Of course I remember Frieda and I miss her very much. It's a shame a troll scared her off. Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

I knew you would, many of us do & yes, it is...
Nice. I don't know Frieda, but I get the points.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Well thank you too Aaron Flood, cheers.....N
Yes, I do remember Frieda😊
She had been a good friend of mine here, when I was a newcomer at WC(some 5 years back) I still remember how inspiring her reviews were! She had been one of those precious people, who reviewed and corrected my pieces when I seriously didn't knew the difference between writing and scribbling 😊 and all her writings were very beautiful!

Her sudden departure from WC left me puzzled too, but your piece made me think of her & those good days again.
And yes, as for the sudden departure of a talented writer like her from this place,, makes me too come to the conclusion that she might have been frightened by some stalkers & creeps here...Still hoping she's around us sharing her poetry tho.

Thankyou for writing, sharing, & reminding me of Frieda again, Neville 😊

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

2 Weeks Ago

Three out of three? Please elaborate 😊
You're most welcome, Neville😊
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

I wrote, I shared & you were reminded of her, cheers
Saumya

2 Weeks Ago

Oh, yes! *Smile*
Frieda was sure a sweetheart.I hope she doing fine & hasn't stopped writing .. read more
I would love to see her come back again.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

I am clearly not alone, thank you Relic
Her thank yous (or rather her 'grazie mille') of my reviews of her work always made me smile. She and Jack penned some of the best collabs that I have ever read on WC.
Nice one Nev.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for taking time to consider these words. Yes she was a little bit special.....
If I were Frieda, I'd ignore/block, forget such negativity. For one such jaundiced soul, there are a thousand friendly ones who just adore her poetry and her spirit. She could chose to come back for them...A great poem, dear friend.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Divya, always appreciated...
DIVYA

2 Weeks Ago

You are most welcome!
remember her ,and miss her to !
the troll took care of her,and many more

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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