Remember Frieda

Remember Frieda

A Poem by Neville Pettitt
"

I will leave it entirely up to you, at least for the time being.................

"

Remember Frieda


Why does she no longer submit fresh words here for us to consider

Why does she no longer leave a trace of herself   

behind     

I suspect because you frightened her

 away  

Just like you have so many

 others

Do you remember  

Frieda

?

 

 


© 2017 Neville Pettitt



Author's Note

Neville Pettitt
Not everyone here will understand or appreciate these words, but many of you will & of course, then there's you. We both know who you are

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I miss her more than the our special words: 'petulia' speaking manufactured italian.. and 'pinky' raised coffee mugs...

Giggles, laughter and tears shared whilst I learned how to grow up and cede to my damned fool inhibitions.

She's somewhere, flitting like a butterfly, lighting corners, watching and wating.. and - I'm sure, so sure - she knows she's loved.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Me too & I'm sure you are write......
Cassie

11 Months Ago

yes she knows she is loved and very much missed
Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Absolutely...............



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yes of cos, how can i forget the one who nicknamed me sunshine. I miss her a lot, her words, her messages. I wish she could see this and come back. I miss Jack too...

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Thanks Cassie, oh' and a lot of other people do too
I see this poem in a whole new light now. This was no infamous troll, but a jackal. Scary.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

We will have to wait and see, I guess. Thanks dear friend....N
nice lines,great work remember poem

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Very kind, thank you shruthi
I miss her more than the our special words: 'petulia' speaking manufactured italian.. and 'pinky' raised coffee mugs...

Giggles, laughter and tears shared whilst I learned how to grow up and cede to my damned fool inhibitions.

She's somewhere, flitting like a butterfly, lighting corners, watching and wating.. and - I'm sure, so sure - she knows she's loved.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Me too & I'm sure you are write......
Cassie

11 Months Ago

yes she knows she is loved and very much missed
Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Absolutely...............
sure do miss the Jersey Girl!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Hello stranger, I knew you would too jacob...
Of course I remember Frieda and I miss her very much. It's a shame a troll scared her off. Lydi**

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

I knew you would, many of us do & yes, it is...
Nice. I don't know Frieda, but I get the points.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Well thank you too Aaron Flood, cheers.....N
Yes, I do remember Frieda😊
She had been a good friend of mine here, when I was a newcomer at WC(some 5 years back) I still remember how inspiring her reviews were! She had been one of those precious people, who reviewed and corrected my pieces when I seriously didn't knew the difference between writing and scribbling 😊 and all her writings were very beautiful!

Her sudden departure from WC left me puzzled too, but your piece made me think of her & those good days again.
And yes, as for the sudden departure of a talented writer like her from this place,, makes me too come to the conclusion that she might have been frightened by some stalkers & creeps here...Still hoping she's around us sharing her poetry tho.

Thankyou for writing, sharing, & reminding me of Frieda again, Neville 😊

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

11 Months Ago

Three out of three? Please elaborate 😊
You're most welcome, Neville😊
Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

I wrote, I shared & you were reminded of her, cheers
Saumya

11 Months Ago

Oh, yes! *Smile*
Frieda was sure a sweetheart.I hope she doing fine & hasn't stopped writing .. read more
I would love to see her come back again.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

I am clearly not alone, thank you Relic
Her thank yous (or rather her 'grazie mille') of my reviews of her work always made me smile. She and Jack penned some of the best collabs that I have ever read on WC.
Nice one Nev.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

Thank you for taking time to consider these words. Yes she was a little bit special.....

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