Tic Toc Tic

Tic Toc Tic

A Poem by Pryde Foltz
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A Heartrending write about when it is time to get over it:)

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Published in Strays


© 2016 Pryde Foltz



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A poem of hope for the dumped and broken hearted....

The heart breaks and time passes as it tries valiantly to repair itself and beat anew for another....

An interesting write, and quirky, too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thanks you, Doodley:)
Your voice is so melodious...I absolutely loved listening to this. It's simple yet beautiful...really conveys a strong feeling of melancholy that I think anyone can relate to. Well done, Pryde.

-William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, William:):):)
A most striking piece that falls no where and grabs us all darling, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Thomas. Just a little poke at my own melodrama:):):)
Fantastic! Loved hearing you recite your poems! Enjoyed it a lot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much, Tiana:)
So beautiful!!! It reaches the deepest and hidden cores of the heart and leaves it feeling mesmerized... So beautiful...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, IP:0
This was amazing. Outstanding verbal poetry dear Pryde.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Coyote:)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Pryde.
I remember the time we met. Somewhere in a far off universe dangling words in front of our heads. It's always a surprise to feel you kissing my face with poetic utterances that bring blush to my face.

Pryde you are inspiration and fun!

Regards,
Al

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Al. No kinder words could be spoken to another:) Especially the fun part:):):)
dear Pryde, You are brave to share
your feelings. It helps others to feel
well-adjusted. A fascinating movie...
almost like a silent movie but very
Informative for moving on. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Pat. I am drawn to the idea of poetry as healing and so here I go:)
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Pryde, I am drawn to his blue eyes which
are very healing... and so here I go...
Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you:):):)
The puppy dog gets me every time.
Who can stay mad at a puppy?!
Nice little poem, creative delivery.
Crying is good. It's like cleansing.
Not all the time, but sometimes.
May I offer a shoulder? :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Yes ... crying is a release. It helps release the built up grief energy. I wrote this piece awhile b.. read more
Closed

1 Year Ago

Happy to hear! :) you're welcome!
As always a thoughtful write and wonderful presentation.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thanks, KL. Always love when you visit:)

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Pryde Foltz
Pryde Foltz

Vancouver, Canada



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I post almost exclusively spoken word pieces these days through youtube. If you like a theatrical approach to poetry you will enjoy friendship with me. If you are a strictly a black word on white pape.. more..

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