His Love

I almost cried while writing this poem. I should have to pay for my mistakes but instead Christ gave me rest and took on the weight of the world. I am so grateful for that :)

His love is indescribable.

His love is undeniable.

He gave his life for you and me while hanging on an unholy tree.

He should have been worshipped, praised and adored

 Instead He was forced to wear a crown of thorns.

He suffered and cried while waiting to die.

He was teased and mocked

Beaten and bruised .

He was bound by chains.

He was guarded at the grave.

His life was perfect.

He knew no sin.

Yet He gave his life to call you His friend.

Reviews

[luviva]

ok this really brought tears to my eyes.
this is such a great poem that recognises the need to
praise HIM for he really loved us.
it just makes me sad to see some people who still dont believe
yet he really LOVES en HE continues to live HIS life with us.
THIS IS SUCH A GREAT POEM FELLOW BELIEVER!
and it relates so close to my poem i have just drafted titled " I DON'T KNOW"

[StayAnchored]

Writing this brought tears to my eyes aswell. Thank you for reading! :)

[luviva]

yo welcome!

[Riding the Rainbow]

really good piece...well done...

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so much! :)

[Chidoriflower]

This made me cry! Wonderful, Lillie J.! Praise be to God! :)

[StayAnchored]

It made me cry writing it! Thanks for reading it and for the review :)

[Chidoriflower]

You're very welcome!! :)

[Levi Levin]

A wonderful poem about our Saviour. Good job!

[StayAnchored]

Thank You! :)

[amy p]

Wonderful poem that is very meaningful and thought provoking. I enjoyed reading it.

[StayAnchored]

Thanks :)

[marie]

great message behind the piece absolutely loved it:) just a little advice- fifth line first word filler word, it detracts from the entire piece. third line on a unholy tree should be on an unholy tree these are your own choices to change i'm not you and you should definitely keep to what you feel is right and whatever God is leading you to write

[StayAnchored]

Thanks for your advice and I agree :)

[marie]

:) just trying to help:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

His love is amazing and no one could ever match it.

Great Job

[StayAnchored]

Yep! Thanks :D

[Silhouette]

This is really sweet and full of powerful emotions…beautifully written.

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! :D

[Silhouette]

You are welcome :)