Ms. Sadness

Ms. Sadness

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fell in love with

the sadness,

which later,

became my passion.

The black became my friend.

Bested by the

light I was given.

So I caved in,

sorta like a caveman.

Then I died

again when she

glanced in.

I asked myself,

“should we dance

again?”

I couldn’t make up my mind so,

I fell back into the black

and wandered through

Wonders.

And now we’re back here,

falling in love with sadness

again.

So mote it be



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more



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i think we wander through wonders more often than not,,just can`t seem to make up our minds

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

And even more so, at least for me at least...
Thank you for reading Ron, always a pleasure!
 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

my pleasure bro
this poignantly captures a really difficult sentiment. well written

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you graceful.
The phrase. "back into the black" really sticks with me. In a few short words it describes a very strong emotion, one many of us can relate to at times. Wonderful write!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Sweet, I'm glad that that phrase did stick out to you. I almost changed that into darkness, but then.. read more
It's bittersweet as all hell when your talent prides itself on your repeated downfall, man.

I love this piece. It hit home in a couple of areas.

"The black became my friend.
Bested by the
light I was given.
So I caved in,
sorta like a caveman.
Then I died
again when she
glanced in."

Crazy. F*****g crazy. Loved the flow throughout, my man.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Hell yea man you get it. When people ask me what inspires me, I tell them that I write about the stu.. read more
Asante

2 Months Ago

That's an amazing thought process, bro. Won't lie, that inspired me instantly. "I feel that for me t.. read more
I love this!
I especially love these lines :
"the light became my friend.
Bested by the
light I was given."
Can't wait for more!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

I'm glad that you did, thank you for reading.
Emo_Cat

2 Months Ago

your welcome
David my man!
Another one of your masterpieces. I am back here after what feels like ages and this poem is the perfect head-start.
I like the rhythm it has to it...it can manifest into a song. "Couldn't make up my mind so, wandered through wonders"-this is lit! And so true. You don't know what lies ahead so might as well take the plunge! Maybe the parachute will open in time! And if it doesn't...there's always another lifetime! :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

haha Thank you Ishita, I really appreciate that. Oh how I've missed hearing from you as well as read.. read more
Ishita Dixit

2 Months Ago

Hopefully soon :)
Especially like the first four lines. If you can't change it, embrace it, is what I go by ;)
My favourite of yours so far. Beautiful write :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Thank you, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it Yumma.
Dr YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
How we hold onto sadness, and make it our friend.
That way we don't have to seek so far.
Even if we move on for a time, we can always jump back into the black. Sadness and happiness. Powerful movers.


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Paul, I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and you're right, it is easy to make it yo.. read more

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