Ms. Sadness

Ms. Sadness

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fell in love with

the sadness,

which later,

became my passion.

The black became my friend.

Bested by the

light I was given.

So I caved in,

sorta like a caveman.

Then I died

again when she

glanced in.

I asked myself,

“should we dance

again?”

I couldn’t make up my mind so,

I fell back into the black

and wandered through

Wonders.

And now we’re back here,

falling in love with sadness

again.

So mote it be



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more



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The poem is very good. I appreciate that you got into this subject and didn't make it boring. It is short and on the subject.
My favorite lines were:
"Then I died
again when she
glanced in.
I asked myself,
“should we dance
again?”

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"and now were back here
falling in love with sadness"

My favorite lines. Nice poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Kathrine, I'm really glad that you enjoyed those lines.
You have a way of taking the reader on a ride! I LOVE, LOVE, the emotion in this piece! Your work is where truth combines with reality opening up for all to feel connected in some way to the pieces you write! Well done! I fell in love with sadness before.
Tabby

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Tabby, always such a pleasure to hear from you. And thank you for thinking so,.. read more
It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more
Heartache :(( this is so sad and deep at the same time. I loved it :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

Ironically, it is what keep me happy.
Thank you for reading Nora.
Nora

3 Months Ago

You're welcome :))
i think we wander through wonders more often than not,,just can`t seem to make up our minds

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

And even more so, at least for me at least...
Thank you for reading Ron, always a pleasure!
 wordman

4 Months Ago

my pleasure bro
this poignantly captures a really difficult sentiment. well written

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

Thank you graceful.
The phrase. "back into the black" really sticks with me. In a few short words it describes a very strong emotion, one many of us can relate to at times. Wonderful write!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Sweet, I'm glad that that phrase did stick out to you. I almost changed that into darkness, but then.. read more
It's bittersweet as all hell when your talent prides itself on your repeated downfall, man.

I love this piece. It hit home in a couple of areas.

"The black became my friend.
Bested by the
light I was given.
So I caved in,
sorta like a caveman.
Then I died
again when she
glanced in."

Crazy. F*****g crazy. Loved the flow throughout, my man.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Hell yea man you get it. When people ask me what inspires me, I tell them that I write about the stu.. read more
Asante

5 Months Ago

That's an amazing thought process, bro. Won't lie, that inspired me instantly. "I feel that for me t.. read more
I love this!
I especially love these lines :
"the light became my friend.
Bested by the
light I was given."
Can't wait for more!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

I'm glad that you did, thank you for reading.
Emo_Cat

5 Months Ago

your welcome

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