motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

Reviews

[Sammi]

How fun you made this senryu form Jacob, my smile flowed all over. :D
I know just how you feel as I am in perpetual four wheel drive lol!
You really have a good sense of humor and I am sure you will soon find just the right gear hehe -- thank you for making me laugh and for your great reviews! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Sammi,
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Nothing worse than no traction- better call AAA.
I hate when love gives me the slip.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I called them an hour ago and am still waiting for them to show up...:)))
thank you, Cherrie,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Well, I hope you don't get a speeding ticket going fast or need high repair bill.
Is it a fancy ride or a cheap one???
Lol...just kidding .
An excellent short Senryu!
.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Me? it's one that is barely running, Sami...:)))
a clunker.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

:::::)))))))))))))))

[William Michael Reeves]

Engines driving wheels
Of binary minds too tired
To race up the quad

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am still gunning the engine, just not as fast.
thank you, Bill,
j.

[Nix is typing...]

I love this little haiku, Jacob. So many emotions in so few words. :)

100/100

Nix ❤️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Nix. Actually it is senryu. Haiku is strictly nature but same form as Senryu which can be about almost anything else.
I appreciate your visit.
j.

[Nix is typing...]

Ooooh, thanks for explaining!! :)
I enjoyed it :)
Nix ❤️

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank goodness you are not trapped in a Model T Ford.
I have a Honda Accord sports model... with a Sun Roof
I never use. Good time for a Trade to an electric engine...
smooth running and playful curves to manage.
gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, maybe that IS the answer...electric.
thank you, Pat, for the smile.
j.

[Stella Armour]

top gear ... don't blow the engine !

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you , Stella..will try not to.
j.

[¿]

Mmmm....I wasn't a fan of love write ups until I'd reached here in wc....
But am loving the love poems a lot now!

These three lines are fervently penned...hope you'll catch your love soon....Oh! You might have already done that and enjoying life with her ;)
Be blessed :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Tahsin...
j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Even in the beginning you were a love machine...go figure ;p

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe poetically speaking....but not otherwise...ha ha.....but thanks.
j.

[Neville]

I love senryu too
and this one was exemplary
full throttle my friend

N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, N.
j.

[Neville]

Again, my pleasure entirely jacob, N