no cream, no sugar

no cream, no sugar

 

coffee's dark intuitions

latent lyrical laments----lie in wait

wish i had left today

 

alone.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/9/17

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

sometimes alone feels bitter and comforting at the same time. i take mine with a drop of light usually. no sugar

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that...."a drop of light"---
thanks Ana.
j.

[Ana Papaya]

Welcome :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Just as black coffee, no cream and sugar, sometimes we regret being with someone or something we don't really like. We may want to give chance to improve its "taste" , yet it is what it is.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Dhaye--

j.

[GwenLark]

Fabulous alliteration. Well done. Short and to the point

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Gwen.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

no cream no sugar ..cut to the chase! what a somber, and mysterious write to me ... things went bad at the coffee shop ... i smell the intoxication of strong black coffee as i morose over perhaps having come with someone ... who ended it ... funny how the way "alone" is presented ..it seems like a good place to be in closing your poem ... but it has been a very long time since alone scared me ;) really like this one jacob ...there is much more in it says i!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, E.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A day to forget as you drink in the bitterness with this very black piece Jacob. Hoping left is left it behind for a new day and not exited permanently?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, on the exited permanently , John....
thank you, for your words.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Do you wish you had not, at all, experienced this particular day? Or, are you wishing you hadn't encountered someone in whose company you greeted the next day?
In any event, coffee sounds pretty good right now.
Stunning little write!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy....
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Usually I like to drink coffee black and day dream on the aroma and taste but this had dark undertones with dark intuitions and the wish to leave this day. A nice write again Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew....
j.