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Almost like a song

Almost like a song

A Poem by wordman
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I lie here every night 
wishing i could hold you tight
as your beauty echoes softly
through my mind as my heart
you  gently entwine

I feel your presence by my side
as you gently caress my mind
as we make love i feel your soft skin
as it caresses mine

It was almost like a song
the orchestra  gently playing
as our bodies dance along
then i awake with tears in my eyes

When i roll over to hold you
i realize it was just a dream
as you lay gentle
on my mind...

© 2017 wordman



Author's Note

 wordman
2 nd place in any poetry contest

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This is so wonderful I like the part of "as you lay gentle on my mind" makes me think of that song. I love music sorry about that. I guess that is why I love poetic writes. Awesome write!

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

don`t usually send r/r`s but this is one of my favorites,,thank you
......

7 Months Ago

no problem, I am wanting read request, sometimes it gives me inspiration, I love reading poems. No p.. read more
ah love it
reminds me of a james taylor song
in my mind I'm going to Carolina
cant you just feel the sunshine
love your work


Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

love your reviews,thank you
as you lay gentle
on my mind...

A vivid and beautiful but alas wishful dream. How deeply felt the void!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you very much
Very nice. Sweet dreaming . Lovely poem with seducive words. Just wonderful mood.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thesong makes the poem sound even better,thank you
Your writings have a certain softness within them though they talk about lack and sadness. Enjoyed reading it big time. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

like my life i guess,sad and lacking,thank you
I enjoyed reading this poem, wordman. I could feel the emotion in your words here. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

Thank you paul !
Aww this hurts just to read. Potent and striking diction and a very strong ending, great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

i thank you for the visit !
Other than the obvious romantic link, I see a pattern that you connect mind, body and emotion.

Are you interested in ideas for improvement?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shannon

1 Year Ago

When you restrict the number of words, as in poetry, each word becomes more important. I might sugge.. read more
 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you !
Shannon

1 Year Ago

Anytime. ☺️
Beautiful vivid imagery. very poetic. Nice write :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit ! i appreciate them all.

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Added on July 13, 2015
Last Updated on October 21, 2017
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 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



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