Almost like a song

Almost like a song

A Poem by wordman
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I lie here every night 
wishing i could hold you tight
as your beauty echoes softly
through my mind as my heart
you  gently entwine

I feel your presence by my side
as you gently caress my mind
as we make love i feel your soft skin
as it caresses mine

It was almost like a song
the orchestra  gently playing
as our bodies dance along
then i awake with tears in my eyes

When i roll over to hold you
i realize it was just a dream
as you lay gentle
on my mind...

© 2017 wordman



Author's Note

 wordman
2 nd place in any poetry contest

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This is so wonderful I like the part of "as you lay gentle on my mind" makes me think of that song. I love music sorry about that. I guess that is why I love poetic writes. Awesome write!

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

don`t usually send r/r`s but this is one of my favorites,,thank you
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10 Months Ago

no problem, I am wanting read request, sometimes it gives me inspiration, I love reading poems. No p.. read more
ah love it
reminds me of a james taylor song
in my mind I'm going to Carolina
cant you just feel the sunshine
love your work


Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

love your reviews,thank you
as you lay gentle
on my mind...

A vivid and beautiful but alas wishful dream. How deeply felt the void!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you very much
Very nice. Sweet dreaming . Lovely poem with seducive words. Just wonderful mood.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thesong makes the poem sound even better,thank you
Your writings have a certain softness within them though they talk about lack and sadness. Enjoyed reading it big time. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

like my life i guess,sad and lacking,thank you
I enjoyed reading this poem, wordman. I could feel the emotion in your words here. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

Thank you paul !
Aww this hurts just to read. Potent and striking diction and a very strong ending, great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

i thank you for the visit !
Other than the obvious romantic link, I see a pattern that you connect mind, body and emotion.

Are you interested in ideas for improvement?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shannon

1 Year Ago

When you restrict the number of words, as in poetry, each word becomes more important. I might sugge.. read more
 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you !
Shannon

1 Year Ago

Anytime. ☺️
Beautiful vivid imagery. very poetic. Nice write :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit ! i appreciate them all.

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Last Updated on October 21, 2017
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 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



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