The green eye

The green eye

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E

The evil eye

I see it

It hunts my soul

It wants my life

I will not let it take me

For I try not to look

In that giant green eye

For it wants my time

But I want to make it

For why do you hunt

My beast with in

Why are you so ugly

Can’t we be friends

For aren’t you apart of me

The part that I don’t want to see

To the eye I see when I look at myself

It this very beast

I will never be

By why doesn’t it keep pulling on me

Does it truly want my tainted heart

@All rights reseved by Ashley.M.E.



© 2010 Ashley.M.E


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Nice job!! I love it. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


"with in" is within together, but apart from that very...well...dark. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice write, it kinda reminds me of the song "Monster" by Skillet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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