When he comes back

When he comes back

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E
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Getting over the biggest a*s you will ever meet. Take this as a warning to all you think they can use a woman, they will fight back.

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When he comes back

When the girl he is with

Isn’t enough

When he cries

And she will not pick him up

When everyone around him

Realizes he is a nut

He will comeback

Crying and in pain

 

He isn’t worth a heart

He isn’t worth care

You try to help him once

But he just didn’t hear

Why do people only see?

The beauty and the heart

They only seem to love me

For the things I don’t want

 

Sex isn’t what I am worth

So when he comes back

I will just pull him apart

Because he isn’t worth

A place in my hurt heart

I know too many people like him

Replacing him isn’t enough

I need someone better

That is what I will get

 

He isn’t worth a heart

He isn’t worth care

You try to help him once

But he just didn’t hear

Why do people only see?

The beauty and the heart

They only seem to love me

For the things I don’t want

 

I hope he realizes

The best damn this was me

When he comes back

He will not have my heart back

It is mine to save

As I cut him apart



© 2011 Ashley.M.E


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i love this !!! its really good!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


So defiant .. i can see why one would not want him coming back.
Looking for greener pastures is not all it is cracked up to be.
Nicely written, Ashley.

Chloe

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can connect so much with this poem except from a male perspective this was very well written and I really enjoyed the line they only seem to love me for the things I don't want well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Pros: Quite a good poem. I can sense the anger and frustration this person has with the guy, which is good. I also like the repetition of that one whole stanza.

Cons: None, I just wish guys weren't such jerks to us girls.

Overall: A good poem about getting over someone. I hoped it help you get over whatever jerk it is that made you want to write this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice. You rise above a sleezy loser. Well put and a decent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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