I Am Hit.

I Am Hit.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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It feels like you shot me again

Am I an easy target?

Please, oh please tell me why you shot me

It’s funny how you always hit me straight to my heart

No one does it as good as you

I really wish I was bulletproof

Or, at least my heart

I wish those bullets would glance off

Instead of hitting it straight.

So many shots

So many hits

Not even a single miss..

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


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A Risen Heroine.
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Who is hitting at you? But its good you manage to turn the action into rhymes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great! Really beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago



Well done...each line strikes with pinpoint accuracy. There are those times where we've opened our hearts to a certain someone only to regret it later when we find ourselves defenseless against their words and actions. You have described the situation very well...and it's a long lonely slog at times getting through the blues.

Nice work...!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Boy can I relate to this! And still I continue to be a target for those shots that go straight for the heart without fail. Keep on penning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm sorry for you

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this one alot. It's message is conveyed straight and emotionally. great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Isn't it amazing how people we love hurt us so much worse then anyone else ever could. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Nice set up, cool ending. Practice = a perfect shot :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


very deep.. i love it ^w^

Posted 11 Years Ago


I get this! Nicely penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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