I Am Hit.

It feels like you shot me again

Am I an easy target?

Please, oh please tell me why you shot me

It’s funny how you always hit me straight to my heart

No one does it as good as you

I really wish I was bulletproof

Or, at least my heart

I wish those bullets would glance off

Instead of hitting it straight.

So many shots

So many hits

Not even a single miss..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always,

Reviews

[Gilbert Saint]

Who is hitting at you? But its good you manage to turn the action into rhymes.

[SinnerInspired]

Great! Really beautiful

[Forest Green]

Well done...each line strikes with pinpoint accuracy. There are those times where we've opened our hearts to a certain someone only to regret it later when we find ourselves defenseless against their words and actions. You have described the situation very well...and it's a long lonely slog at times getting through the blues.

Nice work...!

[Daytonight]

Boy can I relate to this! And still I continue to be a target for those shots that go straight for the heart without fail. Keep on penning.

[Calypso]

I'm sorry for you

[Valandil93]

I liked this one alot. It's message is conveyed straight and emotionally. great job :)

[sarah]

Isn't it amazing how people we love hurt us so much worse then anyone else ever could. Great write!

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Nice set up, cool ending. Practice = a perfect shot :)

[Carrion.]

very deep.. i love it ^w^

[Becky C Strukamp]

I get this! Nicely penned.