For You; My Savior.

For You; My Savior.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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You know...

I would never let you go...

I will never forget about you...

You, My Savior...

You mean so much to me...

You’re the light in a darkened world...

Don't let anyone judge you...

"Cause they don't even know you

All they see is scars

They don't see the angel

Living in your heart."

Because...

When I think of you...

A smile appears on my face...

You know I will always be there for you...

I will never let you down...

I can't...

You mean so freaking much to me...

I've never had such an amazingly wonderful friend like you...

You sure are worth dying for...

I will give you my all to help you...

We’ve had our fights...

But…

It didn’t really affect us...

Well, it did...

We realized how much we need each other...

Promise me one thing...

Have a good time at HDE...

I beg of you...

It’ll be hard to stay at home...

Waiting for you to come back...

Yet…

I know you’ll have the year of you life....

Even though we’re so far...

We’re so close...

Because…

You’ll always have that special space in my heart...

You digged your claws...

Deep into my heart...

If you ever leave...

You'll leave an open wound...

A wound for life...

A wound there will never heal...

Because...

I will rip the wound open...

I will never be able to cope up with the loss of you...

I want you to know one thing...

I love you for you...

You're perfect just the way you are...

You're an angel..

 

Your Fallen Heroine..

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems..
Honest Opinion As Always~

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Sweet poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so beautiful...I can kind of relate to this too...which I can with alot of your poems. ^_^ I like that. Really great poem, this is...actually kinda made me feel your pain, in a sense. Very touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


love this. absolutely a heart felt write for a friend.:D great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved this! it was so heart felt and sweet! great write! ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem shows an appreciation of friendship and how much they mean to us - great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is so beautiful and sencere!! I love it! Magnificent poem :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


A Fallen Heroine....
You made me cry :(
With this amazing heartfelt poem
Your poems get better& better

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very heartfelt poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The consistency of the narrator voice is extremely wonky. Switching between formal, if simple, speech such as in the first 6 lines to the slang-filled Dialect that follows is jarring. While neither is inherently bad, the use of both seems unnecessary and hurts the tone of the poem. While your idea is heart-felt, the piece itself is too full of unnecessary problems to fully bring it across.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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