Don't say goodbye

Times running out on us.
I came back too late.
I hope to stay with you until the first snow.
So I can wear those socks that you bought me.
But I will die before that,because of you.
I know it hurts for you to be with me.
But I love you.

Look at me.

 

It is just the beginning .
It will hurt more later.
You will hurt more than me.

 

 

I wish I'd hurt for you.
Don't take me suddenly.
Give me enough time
to say goodbye.

 

 

Fool.If it hurts,scream.
Hold me and cry.
Don't try to hide it.
It hurts me so much.
I feel as if I'd die before you!
My heart.. It's broken.
Because I love you enough
for my heart to burn.
Medicine doesn't work anymore.

 

 

It is raining.
The rain can't cool down
my love for you.

 

Come on,don't follow me
into my dreams.

 

When I am with you at night
it feels as if it were day.

 

Now I believe that phrase

that you can see with eyes closed.

 

I am still waiting for that day to come...

Don't say goodbye. . .

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[.shalynn.009.]

"Times running out on us." Should be "Time's"

"I hope to stay with you until the first snow.
So I can wear those socks that you bought me." I like these lines. Something so simple that means so much. It's the small things that mean a lot.

"Come on,don't follow me" I like the contrast within this one line.

Although this isn't my favorite poem of yours, I like it. Saying goodbye is a hard thing, and you got the heartbreak and difficulty of it across well. Good job.

[Holly]

You're evolving in writing is coming along so wonderfully and I always love reading your work Sweetie. It's always so powerful and emotional.

[sushi]

sometimes, the behavior of our loved one hurt us and its same as death. Wonderful structure of emotions have been displayed.

[Sweets]

I can relate to this...Everything in this poem is reflected on my life.
This is wonderful !
Great work!

[Ginger]

This is so beautiful and sad at the same time. Saying goodbye to a person is a hard thing to do especially when you love them very much. Excellent write

[Alexis]

"Fool. If it hurts, scream
Hold me and cry.
Don't try to hide it.
It hurts me so much.
I feel as if I'd die before you!
My heart.. It's broken.
Because I love you enough
for my heart to burn.
Medicine doesn't work anymore."
-LOVED that stanza. So much emotion. Goodbyes are always terribly hard. Great write!!

[Short.Nerd]

Great write!

[Sarah McConnaughey]

This is very sad. Goodbyes are very hard, and worse when you never had a chance to say goodbye. Then you're left with regret that can eat you alive. This is a very emotional piece. Thank you for sharing.

[Alicia™]

Sigh, goodbyes are always so much harder than hellos.

[A]

Some goodbyes would leave an unforgettable void that would last forever... They are also one of the hardest things you face over and over during your life-time
very romantic lines that I truly enjoyed reading in this poem
wonderful job.