Tree

feelings of a tree...

    

I am alive D****t

I give you

 fruit

I give you fragrance

I give you home to live and grow

I give you shelter

I give you shadow

I give you fresh air

I give you different medicines

I give you all I have

Because of me you are alive

You give me suffocation

through pollution

You take my life 

by taking away water

You didn't give me the care I need

You only have the habit of cutting and

making money out of it

You didn't care about me

You only care about yourself

If I'm alive

You are alive

I am the Tree D****t. . .

Author's Note

Review this as you like...give some suggestions my way:)

Reviews

[jay-lyse]

Very important, and a unique topic. I like how open-minded you were. It almost sounded like an actual tree speaking. And I also liked how emotionally connected you were. Feeling the tree's pain, how it suffers and how we as humans sometimes abuse its importance without a second thought. Very Interesting!!!

[Abd-afeez]

Now i felt the piece vibrating due to poignancy. You've no doubt vividly expressed a feeling and its that of the used and that has no doubt made the piece very unique. I love this, keep writing my good friend.

[Dove]

This is a very unique topic,you did a really good job on this. I love the last three lines. In this piece it was almost like it was an actual tree speaking.

[Extant]

*Smile* I thinks darling and fun.

[ivizarx]

lol, enjoyable none the less... good quick nature rant

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Love how you made the tree speak for itself. it made this poem awesome.

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like it a lot :)
Thanks for sharing! :D
I like how you gave the tree a "personality" :)

Well done and keep up the good work :)

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Akshat♥]

Thank you everyone for your precious time for reviewing my work..
I owe you all :)

[Hotwater]

A 'green' poem of importance, there can never be enough trees. Well done to you!
*bird*

[Emily Rae]

this reminded me of the classic book..."the giving tree" by shel silverstein

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I like the perspective here. A passionate write, and a good message. Just as the tree gives us life, without it we are not living; in a sense anyway. We need that purity of nature, that connection; we are are more like the trees, the water, the earth, we all share life.