You know already

Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

Words which I wanted to say 

I didn't say

I think you knew them already

Things which I wanted to show 

I didn't shown  them either

I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen

I didn't tell you

I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets

which I wanted to tell you

I think telling  you all this

makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth

but somehow can't help myself

so told you a lie

I think you know these lies already

I am in a position 

where I know that you know 

all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 

on believing  you. .

 

Author's Note

please give honest reviews..give ratings also:)
read carefully before reviewing. . .

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Lies are a sad fact of existence. To me this poem seemed to talk about two different communication problems; the first being that there are too many lies, and the second is that often we do not say the words we should, because we assume the other person already knows... this means communication is ineffective and could lead to (often disastrous) misunderstandings.

[Akshat♥]

I agree that it could lead to misunderstandings..
but without misunderstanding life is incomplete..
like truth ..lie has equal balance in life
If your love is true you will definitely solve these misunderstandings
easily..In love there is no communication gap..thank you for the review :)

[kaylynnmelody♥]

thank you for the read request and posting this interesting read. keep writing.

[Andrew Wright]

When it doesn't need to be said to be known, those tacit grippings at emotion that are too large for words. Very wonderful.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good write. Rather unique. loved it :-)

[thoughts of jade]

great poem... as always you've created another piece where i can really relate to and learn things from you

[Michael of Gilead]

interesting, there is a time to think, but there is also a time to act

[Richard Williams]

Gentle pleasing words, delicately fine poem.

[patricia]

A wisp of gentle reflection.The poem starts off reminiscing about someone then seems to change to the same person being there now. Maybe its someone who has gone from the speakers life but is there in spirit. The sentiment voices something we kind of know but haven't put into words. It is a good expression of a person who found trust and could appreciate it. Thankyou.

[guiltyascharged]

Awwwwwww! This is so cute. I really loved how you made the pictures blend in with the words and I've been through this as well.

[Kes]

Sweet. I liked it. I can't quite explain why... perhaps I can relate to it...
Great work.