You know already

Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

Words which I wanted to say 

I didn't say

I think you knew them already

Things which I wanted to show 

I didn't shown  them either

I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen

I didn't tell you

I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets

which I wanted to tell you

I think telling  you all this

makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth

but somehow can't help myself

so told you a lie

I think you know these lies already

I am in a position 

where I know that you know 

all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 

on believing  you. .

 

Author's Note

please give honest reviews..give ratings also:)
read carefully before reviewing. . .

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

[Veronica Chandler]

What a beautiful picture you painted with this work; the repeated words highlighted by color really pops out from the other text and helps accentuate a central idea, "I Think..." The flow is soft, seasoned with a bit sadness; this is a very nice piece!

[Lourisa]

You have demonstrated that unspeakable bond between two soul-mates so well.
I would just write the 'you' out in the first stanza instead of using 'u' but that's just me :)
Great work!

[Hello, Goodbye]

seems very honest.. but at the same time very self contained. I think there is an even deeper feeling buried that if you can reach.. can because a strong poetic expression.. thats not to say that what you have written here is not good.. it certainly is candid sentiments that are very easy to relate to..

This is really good. Full of feeling and well thought out. Ok First and third stanza you say 'you knew them already' Change one. The one repeat throw the flow a little. Fifth stanza watch for tense. You mix present and past there. Final stanza 'on believing you' is a little rough. maybe 'from'?
Good poem overall!

[Jessica L. W.]

Awesome poem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

What an incredible bond between two souls. Having someone who knows you this well is a blessing, but it becomes easy over time to become so comfortable that you alienate them. Beautiful work.

[Erinne S.]

This is beautiful! I loved the way you formatted this and used the pictures to start the poem off. I also liked the colored font. It gave the piece uniqueness.
Awesome job!

~Erinne

[Lively]

One of the best poems i have ever read. Keep it up.....

[quinfinn]

marvelous piece on regret and acceptance, beautifully conceived and well written.
great job!