I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[Pradnya]

honestly i loved it,

[Akshat♥]

Thnx!

[Alexa Tasch]

Very emotional. I liked the way it flowed and it seemed very honest. Great write

[Akshat♥]

thank you:)

[laughinglullaby]

I can definitely relate to this piece. This is very honest, short, and beautiful. Keep it up.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

It's good, I think keep on writing, the more you write the stronger your word play, and unique metaphorical ideas.

[Jack Isaac]

I sure do know that feeling of going numb for the way people react -- nobody is consistant anymore --or so it seems. This poem goes straight to the point and is easy to read, I like that! Nicely expressed sentiment in your sense of Not a Single Space, a powerful write. Thanks :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Sad and strong, a person can only take so much before they themselves make the choice to not let another hurt them.. Great write

[Rhea]

..awesome to some extent..practical feelings..lucid words.. good one!!

[TheSweet]

I think it is often important to be able to understand the views, opinions or perspectives of everyone. Often, there is no real problem but a misunderstanding, or lack of knowledge. If there is ever a problem - there must be a reason why each backs their own side - and as a result you can learn to accept that others will never understand you truthfully. You just have to do the best you can to walk in everyone's shoes. Thanks for sharing :)

[misha]

This was very good.

[Sarah Jane]

I really like

"You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice"

Its so wise and so simply short. To myself ( and this may not be what it is) those lines say that you can trust them once and hate them once for deceiving you but if you trust them twice, you cant hate them again for your own foolishness.
I like that because I believe in second chances and give them to people who don't always deserve them. I can't hate them twice though. Thank you for the small wisdom:)