I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[msharma]

Great feel

[Suditi]

Wow. This is intense.
Everyone goes through this phase sometime or the other and it strikes a chord.
The complication of relationships..the desire to clear things out but aware that it wont be of much use..you have penned it down really beautifully.
Hope to read more from you Akshat!

[MoriartyMesa]

Part of me felt like this was a shouting piece, which I like, i can see doors slamming and a girl crying.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, i love how this poem makes me feel! Emotional, exceptional, and brilliant piece. I know how this feels! It's really hard to deal when someone hurts you... that will not go away... the pain lingers and we'll have to just move on. But it doesn't mean, we'll recover fast.

[Sleepless]

hum well its si reallay good ! jk i cant be simon cowell when it comes to reviewing poetr not to that extremem though i like it i know what it feels likes its kind of like adding one last sentence when someone hurts you it can eave scars even ifthey say sorry the wounds made open once more when they hurt you again is like they put salt onthat opened wound that hasnt sealed loved it :P!

[Marissa]

I love this it is so deep and emotional.... I think poems are all about writing about your emotions and expressing them in a way you can't just say out loud and that's why I like this one...great job!

[Ama May Cooper]

Very emotional , a strong sense of pain and emptyness rings from everyword... honestly i cant find much negative to directly point out and im not just saying that.

[The XYZ Writer]

A poem that lets off emotions... not too many poems do that to me. The times when your feelings just go numb, as Nautili said, so that we can move on over a period of time without feeling even worse. Many of us can connect with your poem. It perfectly describes how I felt last year for a couple months.

Not amazing, but truly a connecting poem. :)

[Nautili]

i know how that feels....sometimes we become numb in order to cope. ... it is amazing how we adapt to harsh cirumstances; sometimes we disassociate with our own feelings, and it is as though we are outside of ourselves, looking in. Good write.

[Dayran]

A dead calm in the ocean when the sailboat sits on its bottom without even the hint of a breeze....Perhaps its waiting for a second lease on life, like a second wave.