"In-Passing..."

"In-Passing..."

A Poem by Chris
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A moment's reverie

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“In-Passing…”

 

I've been a weed

…in God's garden - but oh the colors -

oh …the colors… were soooo worth it.

 

Chris


© 2019 Chris


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I love this succinct revel in being part of "God garden." Very well penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


weeds have colors of their own, the corn flower, the thistle, the morning glory vine that chokes the bushes with color. Some considers weeds some other think flower, it's the perception of self happy to be in your own garden that makes the other colors brighter

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chris

4 Years Ago

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Oh how much I love this beautiful small poem. And I love the colors too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chris

4 Years Ago

Takes one that knows.
loved the absolute Zen in these fine few words we all would if we could

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chris

4 Years Ago

Nothing more to say... needing said.
Worth it or not it's just a moment of joy. It doesn't last long.
You have the right to choose. Make sure you're choosing right.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chris

4 Years Ago

A good thought shared... and appreciated.
A "weed" perhaps, but what a splendid view and touch from what surrounds us. A piece that speaks to humility and gratitude. Well said, Chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love this, it made me laugh actually because I recently learned that nothing is ever wasted in life, all the times we might have been weeds wondering why we couldn't be flowers yet, all lessons for us to move forward with, before we could blossom. The colours along the way ... all worth it.
Laura

Posted 4 Years Ago


Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

I enjoyed this just as much this second time around as I did 2 months ago! Just gorgeous.
I love the thought behind these words and your perspective to find beauty in the mundane, plain old weed. Maybe we can learn some humility from it 😀

Posted 4 Years Ago


God loves weeds just as much as pretty flowers...we all make the garden go round....

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Different hues and different views makes it all so exciting interesting and enchanting...lessons and colours all around...and don’t forget the sound....🌹wonderful words 🌹

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chris

4 Years Ago

Hi Kell, thanks for pausing - you doing ok?
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

4 Years Ago

Pleasure..I really do have to pause these days to come here...all is well and I hope with you too�.. read more
Chris

4 Years Ago

We run so damn hard to stay still... chuckling here

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Added on September 7, 2019
Last Updated on September 7, 2019
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Chris
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Lansing, MI



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