The anguish and the vivid imagery seem to get intertwined densely. I feel if love can ever be measured, then it must be done through the poems written in their (lover) absence. I just love it. Thank you Betty for sharing the wonderful work!
- mou
In any poem I read I am always hopeful of finding one image, line, or metaphor that is so arresting that it will linger with me long after I have set aside the page.
She runs swiftly into a cloudburst
and darkness draws near
no stars to light the way
is just that. A beautiful image, superbly rendered. Well done Betty.
sorry for the delay, but been down a rabbit hole of late.
ken
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
No apologies necessary, and thanks you Ken for a superb review! much appreciated...
Warmly, B
Along with imaginative title, your artwork choice perfectly introduces the deep, despondent mood your accomplished pen has so poignantly stroked upon the page.
How hopelessly frustrating it must feel to race so fervently to catch and embrace someone that keeps moving away, just beyond reach; and, the stormy scene your words so vividly paint in metaphoric clarity, emphasizes and brings to life this emotion in the reader's mind's-eye.
Whether passed away, merely left, or stretched psychologically out of reach, there is no doubting "she" departed in dire straits and needs to be rescued with a caring, apologetic embrace before becoming irretrievably lost.
"I do not wish to close the curtains
not just yet" (whew! what an ending)
One that moves powerfully deep, as to keep drifting through long after reading.
Once again, Betty, your skills capture and enfold imagination ever-so tightly! ⁓ Richard🖌️
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
WOW!! Richard what a flattering and thoughtful review...I cannot thank you enough....much appreciat.. read moreWOW!! Richard what a flattering and thoughtful review...I cannot thank you enough....much appreciated...
Warmly, B
hmm. nice one. a case of be careful what you go looking for, you might find it perhaps? you always like to leave the door of possibilities slightly ajar even as she's seemingly running far. i hope she finds cover or an umbrella ... :)
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Thank you Pete for your Astute review...Go Pete!
Warmly, B
Our alter-ego, she got all the answers 'tis why we chase but can't get too close, up and personal, we are falible despite our want/need for perfection, so we keep on chasing, ever and forever..
' no questions, no answers, no whispers
I hunger for her return
for I do not wish to close the curtains
not just yet '
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Thank you so much Tom for a fine review, much appreciated!!!
Warmly, B
A minor quarell with a dear friend ended up in a stormy way; wet, screaming and willful departure albeit temporary. Some want control but others will not have of it, hence losing the sense of it.
A high intensity poem and revealing.
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..