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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Living Loving Laughing

Living Loving Laughing

A Poem by William Michael Reeves
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Triple feature of Acrostic poetry

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Life is a film
I star myself
View an actor
I think is me
No lines to read
Given no script.

Love is a show
Of trust and hope
Viewing our hearts
In scenes of life
Now watching us
Give each other.

Laugh at yourself
Acting your role
Under study
Gets the best parts
Happy to be
In your movie
Now we're showing
Getting it right!

2022

© 2022 William Michael Reeves


Author's Note

William Michael Reeves
In an Acrostic poem the first letter of each line spells out a word. Kind of fun. Write down the word you want then stare at it awhile.

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This was really fun to read.... and what is better in life than living, loving and laughing....the essence of us all...I love the first line of each stanza and I get how you create it.. then use it in scenes of a movie, a show ,etc. well done.
Best, B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

I wrote that first word and first line changed everything. I was going to do dying and something the.. read more



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I tried writing a few of these years back but they didn't have the fluidity to them I wanted. You did a great job with this. Nothing here sounds forced or contrived.

An enjoyable read with a splash of wisdom.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

Thanks. I think sticking to 4 syllables helped with that flow. Harder to write but less complicated .. read more
Relic

2 Years Ago

Those poems were deleted many years ago, Bill. haha
Read on your own timeline. I've had hundr.. read more
I agree William. We must do one thing we love. Everyday. A hopeful and positive poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

I guess that's why so many of us seem to write so often. It's what we need to do. Trying all the dif.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I did like this one Bill. I like the poetry that teaches us. We ain't done yet.
Beautiful job, my friend! Nobody does these anymore. And this is truly classy. Well done, Sir. Wise sentiments expressed very nicely.

Posted 2 Years Ago


These are fun to write and read and it was clever. I enjoyed it and thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

Busy brains are happy brains! Thanks
This was really fun to read.... and what is better in life than living, loving and laughing....the essence of us all...I love the first line of each stanza and I get how you create it.. then use it in scenes of a movie, a show ,etc. well done.
Best, B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

I wrote that first word and first line changed everything. I was going to do dying and something the.. read more
What a fun poem, Bill. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

Thanks. It was fun. Write a word then talk to it while it talks to me. Billigami wants to do superca.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Happy hunting and sharpen your pencil for that one
Another brilliant creativeness from You. the only actor, star and the in charge of my stage (my life) is ME! woooho! that's what I see here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

I became the self absorbed actor who manages to find love and have a laugh at himself. High praise f.. read more
Clever piece....I have written several of these and they are fun.

There was a time several years ago when a couple people started writing them and then they really caught on...
besides Haiku and Senryu...about the only form I tinkered with...but I started finding them too forced.

I don't feel this one is...it sneaks up on us and I really like that.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob. I think it helps to try to write them as a single sentence. I just went with 4 syllabl.. read more

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Added on January 18, 2022
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William Michael Reeves
William Michael Reeves

Seattle, WA



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I live in Seattle. I have been a nurses aide most of my life and my experiences as a caregiver for people with disabilities has inspired much of my poetry. I love the puzzle of poetry. Expression with.. more..

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