Day 4: Chillin' With My Bro 2/15/13

Day 4: Chillin' With My Bro 2/15/13

A Chapter by Alice Crypt; Brittany
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Well the day I wrote this one I was hanging with my bestie all day so I guess this is to you, bro!

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It's always nice to be with someone you trust,
To talk until the day is long gone, 
A new story in every moment is a must,
For seven years now nothing has changed either one.
To sit on  the floor and cradle that heart,
It's a promising thing even though we are different,
Like night and day but made by the same art,
One rests while the other helps it shine, delightfully fervent.
A kiss of death upon ones chest,
A shy sun glowing in the others eye,
There is nothing more to appreciate except the rest,
Together there is never a lie.
A bond never softened even in the erosion of rain, 
Erosion is a natural pain.


© 2013 Alice Crypt; Brittany


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Alice Crypt; Brittany
All critique appreciated very much :3

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Lee
"A kiss of death upon ones chest,
A shy sun glowing in the others eye"
That line really stood out for me. It sounds like you're referring to an older brother and if so, I really like how you went about describing the age difference. And even with this and whatever other differences you two might have as siblings, the differences are all somewhat complementary and irrelevant as your bond is so deeply tied.

nice work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alice Crypt; Brittany

8 Years Ago

Haha! It's actually to my bestie who is a girl XD But we call each other bro a lot lately, we're pra.. read more

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Hi, my name is Alice Crypt: AKA, Brittany. I'm a huge gaming freak, I love steampunk, horror (especially vampire and werewolves (Underworld, Dracula, etc) (Not Twilight, didn't want to have to go ther.. more..

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