Waterfall

 

Let my darkness surrender

To lustful beauty.

The tender hues of sapphire blue

Wash all my broken tears away.

 

Comfort my sorrows

Everlasting and infinite.

Feeling as if I am falling...

Floating, from heaven's clouds.

 

I watch all my yesterdays

Gently float off to sea

As I am overcome with serenity

 I start to feel alive once again.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I love this picture and used it on one of my rights so seeing what you wrote makes me smile.. There's something about the majestic beauty and power that live inside the current and flow of water.. All emotions .. grace, smooth, powerful, cold, warm, comforting or swept away.. I love it all..xo :) excellent write..x

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Peaceful serene art as well as the words, beautifully written!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

amazing and very deep, i can imagine the place and i really like it, wish i was there right now !! xD
Your poem is full of deep descriptions, you used every word at the top of its meaning, i see you pay attention to the words you use, you chose the ones that fit the best with your thoughts =D

[Heromen Selena]

love the picture, absolutely gorgeous. I like the perspective you took of the water fall. Nice job.

[Monica]

Another great write! You have such a wonderful talent :)
I get a peaceful feeling and a sense of renewal...

[luna11]

I love this poem, it's amazing.
It flows beautifully.
Very well written.
And the picture is brilliant, by the way :D
xx

[MandaBear]

expressions are so well penned

[rivers]

This combination attaches if it were a magnet and I am made of stress cracked steel welded back together through this soulful painting. Becoming whole again, for we are all mostly whole given the chance......

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful piece and an incredible picture used. I personally think the adding pictures that tie in with our writing makes a piece even more special. Bravo!

[just is]

1st off i love the picture used,
2ndly i love the write, so lovely and captivating.
Much enjoyed.